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July 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love I love I love I love I love I love
please update as soon as possible!
please update as soon as possible!
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July 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Love love love it! Update please!
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July 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I only have one question and I hope that it will be answered on the next chapter. How long as Sess been watching
Rin and Kahaku????? I hope that he saw plenty. I hope that he saw them at the point when Kahaku falls on her. Sess needs awake up call. Please hon update very
ssooooooon!!!! ^_^
Rin and Kahaku????? I hope that he saw plenty. I hope that he saw them at the point when Kahaku falls on her. Sess needs awake up call. Please hon update very
ssooooooon!!!! ^_^
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July 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story is wonderiful. The detail in it is amazing. I love how you started out with the future and sorta jumped back. I love Kohaku, how oyu put him in. I also love the character you've given Sesshomaru. The first person view usually annoys me, but for this story it's perfect. You convey the feelings in the story so well. And I love how it keeps going up and down. The plot is strong and enticing. I liked how this story is purely sex, sex, and sex. I ove how rin's quirky little attitude has won her, her life. Although the only thing I wonder about is what occupation does sesshomaru have? Is it an actor? I think so. I think that you make it seem not so important. You have great skills at making the story close knit, not leaving holes. I love the christmas scene. It's so sweet. Keep up the wonderiful writing.
~Tanoliko
~Tanoliko
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July 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i cant wait to see how sesshomaru will react
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July 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
If Sesshomaru is jealous, he has no reason to be. Especially since he's dating Kagura. And if he figures he can play Rin than he should be ashamed of himself.
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July 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
All I have to say about chapter 20 is, "How could u leave us like that"!. And the chapter and the rest of the story is really good, I really can't wait for what Sesshomaru has to say to Rin about the scene wiht Kokahu. Update very very soon. And don't be evil and leave us in suspense like the way u did.
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July 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
waaa, how could u leave off at that???!
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July 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ooooohhhh!!!! i don't know whose ass is more cooked, kohaku's or rins!!! perhaps you could explain the relationship they have a little more clearly though. are they casual friends with benefits or what? i'm not tooar. ar. neithers sessy-sama adn i guess thats the point!!! you must update soon!!!
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July 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great chapter.......more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
please update as soon as possible!
i love the way you are writing!
please update as soon as possible!
i love the way you are writing!