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for Innocent Beginnings

by inumag

person gv
schedule January 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
finally!!!!! i ;love this story from begining to end and i stook with it for as long as humanyly possible and im sorry i didnt review as much as i should have but i couldnt find it after awhile but yay...i loved it...so nice...much appluase

most of love for a wonderfully writen story
GV
person Moon Dog
schedule January 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awwww....SEQUEL!
person mahogany
schedule December 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
GREAT story!! i love Rin and Sesshomaru stories! please keep writing! Usually im not a big fan of alternate universes, but there are a few that i like and this was definately one of em!! just wanted to say again, great story!
person N.S.
schedule December 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!!!! Of course, I'm sad that it ended, but I still love it.
person sphinx
schedule November 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great story ya have here, absoutely loved it..
person phoenix
schedule November 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
a damn GREAT story u have here, even though fer many spelling errors here have here and there and i was tryin to make out what are ya tryin to interpret aniwae i enjoyed greatly throughout the whole story especialli since i'm a sess/rin fan.
person yashagrl2004
schedule November 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE your ending.
person Pauchis
schedule November 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ohh Awesome
when you first posted this fic i didnt wanna read it cuz i hate kohaku but i love it
and heyy why dont you continue one of the forgotten ones???? like the one of the artist and the streets woman?
person hibi
schedule November 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was a great happy ending. better than sleeping beauty or whatever ~_^
person anime freak
schedule November 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So they are married right? Well good if they are and please make seaquel. PLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEEEE!