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for Innocent Beginnings

by inumag

person Sarina
schedule July 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Love Love Love it! Keep it coming! Yay for you!
person drake220
schedule July 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
what the hell?!??!?!?!?!??! i'm gonna smash you into a wall maggz! i can't handle these cliffies!!!!!! you're killin' me, man! just killing me! just kidding (about the smashing bit. i wouldn't really harm you. how else would this story continue otherwise??) but seriously, these sliffies are monsterously difficult to get over! i sit there, pressing the down key, absolutely positive that my computer didn't load the page right adn that there HAS to be more and lo and behold! there. is. no. more.
life as one of your fangirls is difficult. you have to update, i must know what happens!!!
person friendlyreader
schedule July 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*explodes* THAT WAS SO CUTE!!! "If only.....", "One day...."!!!! AHH THE LOVE, it's eating aways my soul!!
Here's a thought, make Kagura one chapter and then have her die. I think it would be fitting, don't you? She really has no reason to live and she's just stoppin up the Sess/Rin lovin', so death seto bto be the only solution. *wink*
I love this story SOOOOOOO much that I almost can't take it, but because I know that they WILL get together, I can handle it. There better be a kick ass wedding chapter and honeymoon chapter *wink wink, nudge nudge* They need to ummm...*cough* consumate the marriage, if you know what I mean.....
Man, I must sound like a perv, but I'm just completely excited for a new chapter!!
Keep up the great work!!
person N.S.
schedule July 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I hope you don't plan on stopping the story soon.
person hello
schedule July 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
PLZ write the next chapter soon, it's mean to leave off @ such a cliffy
person me
schedule July 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
why did sesshy have to go \w \w kagura
person ThatsMsDiva2U
schedule July 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, 2 excellent chapters. Sesshomaru was jealous of Kohaku, that's why he forced a kiss upon Rin. Right? I thought it was adorable when Sesshomaru asked Rin to marry him when she got older.
person New Fan
schedule July 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thank for answering my question. When will the cat fight begin between Kagura and Rin? Update soon.
person New Fan
schedule July 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I hope that Sess keep that pre ine in the end. Update soon.
person Irivel
schedule July 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow!!!
a double upate. I think i´m in love with you (just a joke :])
You made me suffer a lot with the end of chapter 20 but now i´m happy.
keep writinh those fantastic fics of yours.