rate_review Reviews

oooohhhhh myyyyyyy GOD. that was freakin' amazing! i am one of the biggest literary perverts i know so let me tell you- when i say that was one of the hottest things i have ever read- DANG! It was one of the hottest lemons in this catagory. holy crap- seriosuly, i'm gonna make my boyfriend read this. whoo-whee!!!!!! lucky rin adn lucky kohaku!!! hot damn!!! that was fabulous!!

Good chapter....but, help me out...Didn't she lie to Sesshomaru?...She just lose her virginity to Kohaku....I know it shouldn't matter because she wind up with Sesshomaru. But, she told him that she never did not before....I love Rin, but damn what liar.......update soon..

Gosh damnit! I love love love love love love this story! I read the first chapter, but never went pass that. But tonight I felt the need to read a Sess/Rin fic, and I read from chapter one until chapter twenty five all in one sitting. Sigh. You know I love your writing style! You do such a fantasic job at displaying emotions between your characters. I'm so in awe of their love and frustration for each other!

Since I haven't been able to review each other, I a n a need to write you a very long revjustjust because I love this story!

I'm so in love with Sess/Rin pairing! I'm so very happy you decided to give this pairing a try. I think it's so sexy that he's much older than her, and she's younger than him. There's the whole forbidden love and psychological difference. Like he's more mature and possessive, and she's confused and so impressionable by him! It's just a sexy relationship.

I can't tell you how much I so love Sesshoumaru's character! I'm a fan of Inuyasha's character from WHWM, but I think Sesshoumaru does such a sexy version of the personality trait. He's fierce, protective, possessive, demanding, and so loving! Everytime I read when he's getting pissed off at him, I just can't stop drooling! Haha.

Now Rin's character is such a total surprise to me! But I like it! She's different! I love how you described her emotional and mental changes as she grows and try to adjust to the love for Sesshoumaru and as a woman. Good job on her charactevelovelopment!

My favorite favorite favorite scene was when Rin wrote that letter to him and he came to her the next morning! I was working overtime on what was happening next even as I was reading through! I just knew Sesshoumaru wouldn't leave her alone that easily!

Okay, I know I said I love that scene, and I do! But I was a bit disappointed at some aspects of it. I actually expected more begging/remorse for Sess, and I WANTED Rin to put up more fights! That was just too easy after all the crying and emotions she went through that night. Only if you would stall the arguments longer than what you had... sigh.

Now my comments on Rin and Kohaku. You know... I actually look forward to more Rin/Kohaku scene just to feul more anger out of Sesshoumaru! He's just so sexy when he's jealous. Are you going to give us a Sesshoumaru vs Kohaku scene sometimes in thter ter chapters? ^^ I think that would be so cool!

And I'm goin say say this just in case I forget! You started out your story with a prelude to the lemon scenes later on in the story, but Kami, I hope you don't end it there! After they get up to the Love Affair chapters, I hope you give us more 'acids' to go along with the long awaited lemons! Hehe.

Now about the handsome, sexy, super hot Sesshoumaru! I think I can say I understand what frustration and confusion Rin is going through with Sesshoumaru! I'm dying to know more about him and what this Kagura character has to do with it! Give us the juicy gossips! LOL.

I'm not sure to what extent AFF allows the reviews, so I'm going to be on the safe side and end the review here! ^^

Looking forward to read more confrontations, sexual tensions, and all that follows! Please update very soon!

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Wonderful chater as usual. I hope that you will update soon. I wonder what other trouble Rin can get into. Hey,
when will Kagara meet Rin? I know that situation will really bring Rin over the edge of rebellion and I think that will
be the time she will not come back. Update soon.

realy great

poor rin

I cannot stand Sesshomaru at certain times! Especially when he orders Rin around like she's a child in the single digits age category. Just like when he got mad when he saw Rin kissing Kohaku and then he forced a kiss on her, but then afterwards he said Kohaku was too old for her. So does that mean she can't go around kissing Kohaku, but kissing him is different? Or even going out with him is different from Kohaku entirely as well? If that's the case then Sesshomaru should be ashamed for the way he's acting. Especially since Kohaku is a very nice guy, who Sesshomaru himself hasn't even gotten to know to be to able to judge him.

Anyway I found both chapters extremely enjoyable. And like I said on mediaminor.org, you're my absolute favorite fanfiction writer.

She can't get anything pass Sesshomaru!!!!!...I had a feeling something was going to happen.....OUTSTANDING CHAPTER...So will Kohaku be getting his teeth knock out now or later? UPDATE SOON.....

I love this story like you would not believe! Keep writing it, and please don't stop in the middle like some authors do! I'd go insane if you did! Please update soon!!!!!!!!!

This is such an amazing story, I love it! I am glad you have been updating more sine you have finished WHWM (which was also fabulous). But please, deal with my impatience as a compliment to your writing and post the next chapter as soon as possible. PLEASE!!!!!! I love Sess and Kohaku, you descibe the perfect men, even though they are different they are both out of this world! Never give up writing. Also, just out of curiosity, is writing a habbit, or are you a published author? PLease let me know.