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August 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
chapter 1 review...
wow... is the first chapter like the ending? sounds like it... and then there comes the flashback... NICE STORY! hey... are u gonna continue with "Take Me Home"? i think tht was the title... i'm more in favor of inu/kag fics... heheh... i like this one too though! wow... 12 years apart... sesshoumaru is reallie emotional! i'm kinda stating the obvious here... hehe... but sesshie is so... inuyasha-ey in this fic! lolz... jealous and loud. but we all love em! great work... update soon! unless u've already finished this fic and i'm late on the uptake... i guess itz not smart of me to review after just the 1st chapter... but i g2g now... so i dun wanna forget to review later...
--konneko--
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wow... is the first chapter like the ending? sounds like it... and then there comes the flashback... NICE STORY! hey... are u gonna continue with "Take Me Home"? i think tht was the title... i'm more in favor of inu/kag fics... heheh... i like this one too though! wow... 12 years apart... sesshoumaru is reallie emotional! i'm kinda stating the obvious here... hehe... but sesshie is so... inuyasha-ey in this fic! lolz... jealous and loud. but we all love em! great work... update soon! unless u've already finished this fic and i'm late on the uptake... i guess itz not smart of me to review after just the 1st chapter... but i g2g now... so i dun wanna forget to review later...
--konneko--
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August 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'M SORRY!!!!!...I MUST HAVE MISREAD IT....PLEASE FORGIVE ME, I WILL BE MORE CAREFUL NEXT TIME......GOOD CHAPTER ...UPDATE SOON
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August 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter. I'm so happy Kohaku and Rin are becoming very close to each other.
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August 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
geart great geat! your story is so cool
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August 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I HATE KOHAKU
he's such an ass
kill him get rid of him
why is rin such bitch
ve tve this story!!
keep up and get rid of kohaku pleae
he's such an ass
kill him get rid of him
why is rin such bitch
ve tve this story!!
keep up and get rid of kohaku pleae
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August 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What a sweet chapter. I think Kohaku and Rin make a cute couple. Shippo was hilarious in this chapter.
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August 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
poor Kohaku..afraafraid of blood I guess???
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August 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 26 was nothing short of amazing. It was sexy, sweet, touching and endearing. Well-written, well thought out and just beautiful overall. Friends DO make the best lovers. ^_^
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August 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That scene was HOT!
I'm have such a fickle heart when it comes to this story.
When I read about Sesshoumaru, I want Rin to be with Sesshoumaru.
But when I read her with Kohaku, I change my mind all over again!
Despite what I feel, we all know that Rin belongs to Sesshoumaru only. *nods*
I love the relationship between Kohaku and Rin.
Even if they have a sexual relationship, it doesn't seem wrong... because it's beautiful and they both love each other.
I would usually stop reading a story if the main girl character had any physical relationship with another guy, but you just make it all okay. ^^
Besides, Rin is entitled to her own happiness, right?
Sesshoumaru needs to hurry up and tell he loves her alread
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But where's the fun in that? =P
I wonder... if Sesshoumaru will find out about their little secret. O_O
I'm waiting for the next chapter! Good job with this update! ^-^
I'm have such a fickle heart when it comes to this story.
When I read about Sesshoumaru, I want Rin to be with Sesshoumaru.
But when I read her with Kohaku, I change my mind all over again!
Despite what I feel, we all know that Rin belongs to Sesshoumaru only. *nods*
I love the relationship between Kohaku and Rin.
Even if they have a sexual relationship, it doesn't seem wrong... because it's beautiful and they both love each other.
I would usually stop reading a story if the main girl character had any physical relationship with another guy, but you just make it all okay. ^^
Besides, Rin is entitled to her own happiness, right?
Sesshoumaru needs to hurry up and tell he loves her alread
B
But where's the fun in that? =P
I wonder... if Sesshoumaru will find out about their little secret. O_O
I'm waiting for the next chapter! Good job with this update! ^-^
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August 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
fucking great this last chapter...ah you know how to create this amazing atmosphere..and tension between two people...please update as soon as possible...