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for Innocent Beginnings

by inumag

person MC
schedule August 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So short. Sniff sniff. Poor Rin. That was a good chapter. ^^
person gv
schedule August 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i HATE Kagura!!!!!!! evil bitch!!!! *takes out her 9. and bust a cap in her FACE!* why cant she just DIE!! *breaks down into sobs*
person Hawkeyesbleed
schedule August 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
More. Now.
person mofaf
schedule August 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
sounds like Rin has finally found jealousy. wonder if Rin has made Ses jealous and not realized it.....

wonder if Kagura is gonna make a play for Kohaku.... after seeing how Rin reacted to her with Ses....lol

person drake220
schedule August 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oooooohhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!! that slimey no good insensitive jerk!! bringing his floozy to her home! her territory! oh, you better believe that thwillwill be consequences for that little stunt! am i hearing purposeful make out sessions with kohaku and his yummy abs right in front of sesshomaru or is it my imagination (my imagination, i know but give agirl some hope.) man, i want to see the revenge so update!!
person New Fan
schedule August 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So this is the start of Rin spiral journey to rebellion from that unexpected visit from Sess. Will Rin talk or see Sess again. Please update really soon.
person bibop
schedule August 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
why dont you update anymore? please update please...please...I cant wait anymore:-)
person konneko_nezumi
schedule August 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
review to chapter 2...

wow, sesshie is so... fluffy in this story so far! reallie cute... but ooc... itz a cool story though... i drew the comparison between sesshoumaru and ayame from Fruits Basket when sesshie was talking... have you seen it? i mean... sesshoumaru regularly dusn't hab much emotion, so normally i wouldn't think about him lookin like Ayame Sohma... even inuyasha with his moods isn't like ayame! his hair is too rough-lookin and ayame is like barely ever mad... but then sesshoumaru... acting all happy and stuff... and his speech... so Ayame Sohma-ish! hehe... cuteness... his hair looks like Ayame's silver hair too... although Ayame is without the markings... i think he has the amber eyes... i dun remember... so... GREAT STORY!!! and once again... iono if i've already asked but... will u continue with Take Me Home? oh wells... either way... i'm still a fan of ur work Maggz-san!

--konneko--
=^_^=
person MC
schedule August 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Still in love with this story. It seems so short when you enjoy it so much! >-<

So beautiful - Rin and Kohaku that is!

Love this chapter. And yes, let's not tell Sesshoumaru! Huhu~

I'd beg you to write ASAP, but I know writers can only get pushed so much. Thanks for your effort in updating. ^^ Looking forward to the next chapter!

=D
person drake220
schedule August 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hahahaa!!! i do that with needles! poor kohaku has my sympathies! i love seet pars ans and lovely leavings! glorious enjoyable chapter!!