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for Innocent Beginnings

by inumag

person New Fan
schedule September 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think that Sess enjoyed more than he wants to admit. Update soon.
person New Fan
schedule September 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Poor Rin, I hope that she can get out of this rut she put herself into. I hope that she does not lose Kahaku friendship during
her teen midlife crisis. Update really soon.
person Darckinu
schedule September 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! you know i hate sesshi and his Dad attitude but we always must love those guys who are bad anyway keep going girl love ya'
person me
schedule September 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
how sad but you know what sesshomaru deserved it
person animegirl007
schedule September 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
THIS STORY IS JUST SO GOOD.....How my boy Sesshomaru was acting like a saint to her aunt and uncle...........i was laughing to hard.....and him spanking her, I wonder how long he wanted to do that...these updates are wonderful......I was so understatnding Rin's point of view......I was getting nervoust yot you wouldn't update again ....I'm so glad you did.......PLEASE UPDATE SOON.....I NEED THIS STORY.....
person theMaven
schedule September 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*shudders* Can we say dysfunction? Now, I like Rin and Sess together as much as the next person (okay, perhaps MORE thae nee next person, heehee), but I swear to God these two people you've created should stay far, far, FAR away from each other. SERIOUSLY. Their relationship is not only co-dependent, but it's disintegrated into abuse, as well. I'd hate to imagine what their lives would be like if Ichi and Reika DID let Sess keep closer watch over her. He's fine when HE'S in control of everything, but when somebody starts to think for themselves . . . He needs some SERIOUS counseling, not to mention anger management.

But, of course, you realize since you were able to evoke such a strong emotional repsonse from me, the fic is a screaming success. You've successfully driven them apart, in my opinion, but at this point, I'm not so sure I WANT to see them get together . . . But, then again, I wasn't satisfied with the ending of "Ever After," either. Sometimes, getting the prince in the end isn't worth all the crap you have to put up with in the meantime, especially after all the things he said and did to her. This prince didn't apologize nearly enough, and with Sesshomaru's attitude, I have a feeling your fic might end the same way . . . But it's still very well written and quite entertaining, and isn't that what fanfics are for?

theMaven ^__^
person Sarina
schedule September 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I still love this one. More we need more!
person Stephanie
schedule September 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Dear lord! I cannot stand this story with Sesshoumaru beating up on Rin and her not fighting back. Not really anyway. It is so stupid. Makes me so frustrated. And to know she gets with him in the end? Sickening with the way he's treating her. What a load of bull, "I just really care for you." Rin should never forgive him. She should make him suffer. Goodbye Sessy. Forever.

That's my two cents of the story. lol. It is very well written and I love reading it but it makes me so mad. I can barely read it anymore.
person drake220
schedule September 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
............
he is not allowed to do that. end of story. spanking from your psudo guardian is not proper, not allowed and a borderline sexual offense. sess was totally in the wrong.
person friendlyreader
schedule September 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YES MA'AM!!!! finally!!! she tells him off!!!! man, ive been waiting forever for that! who can say "make-up sex"?
wooooo hoooo!