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for Innocent Beginnings

by inumag

person Shadiyaray
schedule September 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Did I say HOW MUCH I LOVE this story!!
Well I will say it again. I LOVE THIS STORY!!!

person New Fan
schedule September 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Two chapters YIPPPPPEEEEE!!! You go girl, put Sess in his place. Show him you are his ultimate challenge. Now I am going to read Chapter 33 now. Update soooooon.!!!! ^_^
person New Fan
schedule September 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So, Sess is going to lighten up huh??? How long will that last?? If I know these characters, not very long. Will Kagura confront Rin
in the near future? Will we see a cat fight?? I just love it when you have two chapters release. I hope you release two more. Update
really soooooon. ^_^
person michelle
schedule September 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love your stories. This one is great! Thanks for the update!!
person Alania85
schedule September 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yeah yeah yeah....funny and sweet chapter . i really dont know what i love more about sessy . his rude and jerks side or this sweer and caring one. What i knoe is that I love your story and this chapter. keep it up and update soon!
person ivy
schedule September 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AWWWW how cute , i just lsesssesshy so much please update as soon as possible . great chapter
person drake220
schedule September 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i love this fic! i swear, its just consistent quality writing! loved the little rin/kohaku interlude-so sweet and the ending was really really nice. the conflicts are all well developed and solved nicely.
person hibi
schedule September 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
^__^ really like kohaku&rin's relationship and the titles of your chapters
person New Fan
schedule September 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Such an awesome story. Update soon hon.^_^
person drake220
schedule September 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
poor confused rin.....i feel for her! and i feel for her on the issue of the general obtuseness of males- only guys could punch eachpther nad then talk 3 seconds later.....incomprehensible. great chapter! update soon! i want to know what else went on beyond a liss (::shrug:: i'm a SmutMonster. what can i say?)