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for Innocent Beginnings

by inumag

person darkleslie
schedule September 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! i love this chapter, i actually love Kohaku, he's so sweet it's like the guy that's always there for you, but girl are so fucking blio seo see, a good duy that loves us like Kohaku loves Rin, how could she want Sesshi more than Kohaku, or may i say love, well se ya later maggz :D love ya! i'm so glad you updated
person mofaf
schedule September 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
poor Rin....she is sooo confused and soooo hurt
person novasenshi
schedule September 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
CUUUUUUUTTTTTTTTTTEEEEEEE
person me
schedule September 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
keep going
person ivy
schedule September 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
awesome chapter.
person drake220
schedule September 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
god, poor messed up couple. i really don't know who i pity more, kohaku or rin...seriosuly a messed up relationship. its so real, you can feel confused along eith them. i guess thats what makes this story so fabulous
person ivy
schedule September 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great chapter , rin should keep making sesshy jelous so he can realise that it doesnt matter how old she is the only thing that matters is their love .pls update soon
person drake220
schedule September 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
can i com on on how much i love this story? i really do. wheee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Sintar
schedule September 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AHHHH!!! This story is sooo darn good! I can't wait for the next few chapters, sounds like your coming to the conclusion, I hope not too soon!!! Keep up the magnificent work!
person mel
schedule September 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story. You really capture how girls feel. I have had a boyfriend where every time was "back to square one." lol. I love Rin doing the whole game, and you know when she is with Kohaku that Sess is so jelous. lol. Great story. Please update as soon as possible. thx a bunch.