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July 5, 2019 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely WONDERFUL; I am soooo glad I found & read it!!
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August 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I read this story years ago when you first published it and I just found it again. I'm not sure if I reviewed then, but I am now...
It's simply wonderful!! The tension between those two was so thick you could cut it with a knife...great!
Thank you for writing it and sharing it with all of us.
~Utterly Absurd
It's simply wonderful!! The tension between those two was so thick you could cut it with a knife...great!
Thank you for writing it and sharing it with all of us.
~Utterly Absurd
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January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Happy One Year Anniversary!!!! Innocent Beginnings is one of my all time favorites! Thanks for this beautiful romance.
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June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, Wow...I'm just...WoW! I stayed up all night reading this! My neck is killing me, but it was worth it! I love your story! You have an amazing talent for drawing your readers into the world you've created! Excellent!
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May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was the BEST story ever!! i did check out that link(to mediaminer) for that story that was for *some* reason *similiar* to yours(so much). i really enjoyed reading that and am really gonna give you your props! that was hot, no grammer errors, nothing misspelled, and so on! great job! you've really made me the happiest gurl in the world!(lol)
great job!
great job!
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May 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AAAAHHHH, I finally finished this story. It took me two weeks to finish this and now I am finally done!! You've got some errors in this, but other than that I loved it!! I was so pissed at Sess and then I wanted Rin to get it together, but it all worked out. I also loved the first person point of view, that usually gets boring for me after a couple of chapters but you pulled it off well. Anyway loved it:)
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January 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awwww . . . cute ^ ^
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January 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please, Please, Please, Please, you have to write a sequel to this story. You have to start a sequel with these two. All the trouble they went through. We the fans need a sequel to know how they are now through thru their marriage and to find out if they are to have any children and their future together. So, please write a sequel. You would make your fans faces look like this ^ ___________ ^
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January 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent! Bravo! I was very impressed with this story as well as your other ones such as 'When he was mine.' Not many authors can handle Sess and Rin stories so well and you did exceptionally good with the age differences. I was a little thrown off at first because he was so out of character but in later chapters when Kohaku came I could tell Sess so wanted her and I kept wondering what was going to happen. I did not even feel like it was that long. I hope you write another one about the struggles they faced on their road to married bliss. That would be interesting. I tip my hat to one of my favoriet Adult Fan Fiction Authors (anime chick of 'Suddenly Daddy' is another frequent favorite) *_*
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January 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent! Bravo! I was very impressed with this story as well as your other ones such as 'When he was mine.' Not many authors can handle Sess and Rin stories so well and you did exceptionally good with the age differences. I was a little thrown off at first because he was so out of character but in later chapters when Kohaku came I could tell Sess so wanted her and I kept wondering what was going to happen. I did not even feel like it was that long. I hope you write another one about the struggles they faced on their road to married bliss. That would be interesting. I tip my hat to one of my favoriet Adult Fan Fiction Authors (anime chick of 'Suddenly Daddy' is another frequent favorite) *_*