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for A Wish Come True

by SesshoumarusMistress

person Shadiyaray
schedule April 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Your right. I did think that this was like "In the Classroom" because of their similiaries, so so far so good.

person stella
schedule April 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
not a bad story in the least. i hope to read more. great job.
person Sesshomarusgirl56
schedule April 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i love your fic its very good i love it !!! umm just a sugestion do you have to put hiwazono Sesshomaru every time hes in the picture its kind of annoying!! i hope this dosent s lik like a flame well byes!!!
person Sess\'sBewitching Babe
schedule April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really find this story interesting, so far. Please write more. I'm TOTAL rin/sess fan!
-Sess'sBewitchingBabe
person cindy
schedule April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is great and extremely creative and had kept my heart beating the whole time.please write the next chapter quickly!!!
person Feminafures
schedule April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Pretty good fic you have going here. Please continue, I wonder if Sess will take little Rin somewhere other than home..~_-

Lol...JK, it's too soon for that.

Gia
person New Fan
schedule April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
There are some differences to sto story. So long there is no sick prevert going after
young girls (like there is in In the Classroom), then you are starting out good. Now I am
going to read the rest of the other chapters. ^_^
person New Fan
schedule April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Not bad, very interesting story so far. Update soon and longer chapters. ^_^
person friendlyreader
schedule April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh no. Oh no. OH no. OH No. OH NO. OH YEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!! *koolaid man busts through the wall* sorries, ive offically lost my mind, but DEAR LORD, in a car with mr. sex god himself - damn rin is a lucky one. the good times just keep on coming, my friend, so bring on a new chapter and update soon!! adios mi amiga, write another great one!
person EvilDuckTApe101
schedule April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey!!! please keep writing...if possible can you make the chapters longer? your a reallly good writer and i like whats going on in the story... please hurry up and write more!!!