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for In The Dark

by eternalshiva

person Sparkmaster
schedule May 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait for the next installment of this wonderful story.
person Wild Willie
schedule May 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the update even if I am late for reviewing. Love the last chapter.
person Supercool
schedule May 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sessohmaru and Rin make the perfect couple and you write them perfectly. I am so diggin your awesome story,
person Pixie Elf
schedule May 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I will just sit back and wait for the next part of your cool story. Ja Ne!
person Cold Demon Lord
schedule May 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am addicted to your story and can't wait for more.
person shaid
schedule May 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Cool! it gets better and better. What the hell is Naraku up to this time, the scheeming little bastard? grrrr... I really hate that Naraku... even more than I hate Kikyou! And Kaugra... yuck..

Anyway, when is he going to her her about his first mate?! I mean, when you're in a relationship, if you've been married before is kinda important! Is she going to flip out? And how does Inu know Naraku?? And... ok, I'm a HUGE fan of Sesshy/Rin relationships.how how soon is she gonna get to start that family she's after?

I like it a lot. I want to read MORE!!! It's an interesting twist on the story but still seems to stay true ot the characters (at lest as I see them) MORE MORE MORE!!!!!
person New Fan
schedule May 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter and interesting as well. What was it that made Sess go wild like that?? Please update soon.
person TLC
schedule May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The lemon chapter was very sensual and sexy and you didn't sacirfice any plot but now I want to know what else is going to happen,
person Big Bad Wolf
schedule May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Man don't you just hate it when mom has to make an apperance. Great Story!
person Albino Elf
schedule May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just happened to see your story and let me say it is one of best I have read. I actually feel sorry for Kikyou.