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TT-TT You're never going to update this again are you? I hope you wrap it up some how....one day....when you're bored....

This story is wonderful, I am so looking forward to finishing it. I read all 15 chapters curently posted in ONE sitting it was sooo good. You have developed the characters lovely along with a spectacular plot and even worked in some citrus. I have to admit I was impressed when you even worked in the original story line for the most part. The only mistakes I could see were a few typos and that the tense seamed to shift back and forth in the last chapter during the Mir/San citrus. I only have one reguest for this angsty story. "Please dont make me cry any more, please let there be a happy ending to all of this." I dont think I could read any fics for a whole week if it ends badly for the lovers. I honestly did cry, twice. your good. So far all I can do is praise this story. I look forward to reading more of your work.

~ DarknessDawns

Thank you for writing this story and keeping it going. I do hope to see it finished. ^^ You've done a excellent job. Please continue to do so when you have the time to.

Please make it soon. I had given up hope that you would ever update this work. Good to see that you are still with us and continuing this great story.

this is well written and interesting... then there wasn't anymore... it happens every time... i get emotionally involved with a story and then... it was left unfinished =/

it's been so long since you've last updated this extremely captivating story... you are a very talented artist, painting worlds, people and emotions with your words, and with those words, you carry us to places only in your imagination... but when you withhold your words, we are plummeted onto the sharp rocks of reality... slowly we crawl upright; clutching at the cruel cliff we were hanging by, our minds battered and bloody, we plead, we shout, "PLEASE FINISH THIS! please...PLEASE!"

i hope this finds you happy, healthy, and successful. i know it's been a long time but, if you would consider taking the time to complete this fic, your readers will be joyous, but anyone else who stumbles upon this in the future will also rejoice.
if not we will all cry!

i would love to see you start writing again... if there is anything i can do (twist your ar...) to persuade you to continue writing; anything i could do to assist you within my capabilities to help you toward that goal.

thank you for the delightful journeys through your imagination.

ginny

hey let me know when you will up date i realy want to know how this ends and if you need help on polt or story i'll help you this is one of the good one's

Although the story is running along a bit slow for my tastes (I'm am the worst action whore you will ever meet), it is a great mystery and contains quite a bit of suspense, as well as some action, and wonderful literary special effects. It is also much better than many of the fics that are found on the site. I'm not saying that there aren't quite a few great authors here, but you are above average; and that is not only my opinion, but by the percentage rates that I keep up with. You should be proud. Don't give up on this fic. You are doing a great job and, if you are concerned, just know that you should not be disappointed at all by the number of reviews that you are receiving (I read your note).

Why do I go to all of this trouble? Because seizures often interfere with my vocabulary and phrasing. I don't want to put out crap, so I have to have something with which to gauge my ability to keep readers happy with what I am producing.

In other words, your success with this fic is nothing to scoff at. Don't give up. I have a bad memory and often lose track of the fics that I am reading. So, if you would, please email me when you update.

Thanks,

Snow

Thanks for the heads up and the great review, I plan on finishing the story, I just get unmotivated when no one reviews sometimes XD. I noticed a few months ago when AFF was having all the server troubles, alot of the wording in my story went weird like "power" would turn into porwepowe. I must a miss a few when I reviewed the chapters. I'll just upload the chapters from my beta >.> she went through all of them recently. Thanks for pointing out the problems still, I appreciate it.

Besides a few spelling mistakes, this fic is perfect! The right size in chapters and always with the opening and ending that makes you need to read more and see what's going on. I stayed up until 4 in the morning reading this fic and then again when I woke up, I just couldn't stop reading. I'm dying to know what happens with Inuyasha, though and how Kagome can deal with what's happend. I don't know what else to say except that you need to comtinue this fic and I'm sure that there's others that feel the same way... until your next chapter... ja ne ^^

I have been following your story for I want to say over a year now. With the server switch, I lost this story for awhile but always remembered it. This is outstanding. Incredibly well written work. Please continue.