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for Movie House Hanyou

by Numisma

person me
schedule January 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love IT!! Update SOON!
person Apathy5
schedule January 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good Story. I usually don't get into this kind of thing, but its pretty good and funny at times.
person Oyuki
schedule January 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
finally they did IT! woo hoo! hehe. and miroku, poor thing. he needs to live vicariously(sp?) through inuyasha. make him and sango be together! please! more soon please! this is awesome!
schedule January 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was...very intense. I like the way how you made the whole 'losing her virginity' part. It was different than the custom 'bed'. Good thinking!
person sublimetrickster
schedule January 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just thought I'd help you get to 300. Also wanted to say I like your additions to the Lemon, it flows nicer too. You may want to go over it one more time, you've got some 'he's' when it should be 'she's' and the like. Love it as always!
person Julie.O
schedule January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice :D update soon, k?
person Ryu Gabriev
schedule January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
As Cheech Marron would say, "This's some GOOD shit ,man...." I've never laughed so hard in a while....Keep going with this, I love it!
person nena
schedule January 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love the Miroku call scene. It was priceless. Great lemon!!!!!
person Zoid
schedule January 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful, as always, I wish I was able to express myself that sophisticatadly.
Yeah those dreams were freaky, kinda remind me of my own, though *shudders* . And about the one thing I admit I too have been waiting for: What at tough way to lose ones virginity... but then again, I lost mine to the sweet sounds of Slipnot's disasterpiece, the one with the mounting double base rythm, so I'm the one to talk here...
person me
schedule January 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i wanna know what happens in the bed room