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July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I didn't want to have to resort to extremes, but....I'm desperate. *gets down on knees* please, Please, PLEASE update soon. I'm going crazy not being able to read more of this story. I love it; its like an addiction for me. I NEED a fix...soon....now. Pretty please?
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July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ummm...where should I start?? Well, although I've been reading your fic for a while this is the first time I reviwe it. Sorry, I'm so sorry!!! I never know what to write in reviews, and the fact that English is not my first language and that I'm kinda shy weren't of any help, but your fic is so utterly amazing I thought what the hell...
Fist of all, one of the things that cought my attention was how real it all seems, I feel like if this is really happening. I lov your style, it's easy to read and very descriptive but not too much (there's people who think that to be a good writerl you have to put a lot of adjetives and adverbs, so it's almost impossible to read what they write). The characters are well define and have realistic responses (did that make any sense?). It's a very original story, I've never been very fond of gay Inuyasha, but somehow you managed to make me like him like that (I know he's bi, I know), and the reasons you gave him for being that way. I've never thought about it but it MUST be boring to do the same thing for hundreds of years lol. At first I was a little bit shocked by the BDSM scene, being that I've fist heard of it while reading your fic, but now not only I'm used to it, I'm quite interested by it (wow this story really opened my mind lol).
There's a few questions I have relating this story. More than a question this is plain curiosity. Is about that misterious guy Inuyasha seems to know...is it his brother? I really dont' picture Sesshoumaru dying, no matter what. Then there was a ch (forgot the n°) where Kagome is working and falls, and this lawyer woman gives her her card...now it seems Kagome may need a lawyer (I wasn't expecting what happened to her in your later ch, and that's another thing I like about the story, btw) so I was wondering if she was going to use it...or if that scene was just random. Finally, if Kagome having human Inuyasha's pictures in her bag are of more importance or were just for last chapter.
I'm almost finished, just bear with me a little more. Though I love you're lemons, that's not what liked the most in your fic (that's something I'd never thought I'd say...or write, whatever). The parts where Inuyasha was stoned are the best scenes of MHH imo. The way you write what he sees, what he feels...it has all this sureal touch. That's the only way I can express what I felt when I read those ch, like if I was the one stoned.
I'm sorry if this looks more like a mail (a really long one) than a review, and that it doesn't contain any constructive critisism (and probably is full os spell mistakes)...I don't even know if you'll read this lol. Anyway, I love your work and I hope you update soon. Is there any way I can be notified when it does? Just an e-mail with the title would be enough.
neji
Fist of all, one of the things that cought my attention was how real it all seems, I feel like if this is really happening. I lov your style, it's easy to read and very descriptive but not too much (there's people who think that to be a good writerl you have to put a lot of adjetives and adverbs, so it's almost impossible to read what they write). The characters are well define and have realistic responses (did that make any sense?). It's a very original story, I've never been very fond of gay Inuyasha, but somehow you managed to make me like him like that (I know he's bi, I know), and the reasons you gave him for being that way. I've never thought about it but it MUST be boring to do the same thing for hundreds of years lol. At first I was a little bit shocked by the BDSM scene, being that I've fist heard of it while reading your fic, but now not only I'm used to it, I'm quite interested by it (wow this story really opened my mind lol).
There's a few questions I have relating this story. More than a question this is plain curiosity. Is about that misterious guy Inuyasha seems to know...is it his brother? I really dont' picture Sesshoumaru dying, no matter what. Then there was a ch (forgot the n°) where Kagome is working and falls, and this lawyer woman gives her her card...now it seems Kagome may need a lawyer (I wasn't expecting what happened to her in your later ch, and that's another thing I like about the story, btw) so I was wondering if she was going to use it...or if that scene was just random. Finally, if Kagome having human Inuyasha's pictures in her bag are of more importance or were just for last chapter.
I'm almost finished, just bear with me a little more. Though I love you're lemons, that's not what liked the most in your fic (that's something I'd never thought I'd say...or write, whatever). The parts where Inuyasha was stoned are the best scenes of MHH imo. The way you write what he sees, what he feels...it has all this sureal touch. That's the only way I can express what I felt when I read those ch, like if I was the one stoned.
I'm sorry if this looks more like a mail (a really long one) than a review, and that it doesn't contain any constructive critisism (and probably is full os spell mistakes)...I don't even know if you'll read this lol. Anyway, I love your work and I hope you update soon. Is there any way I can be notified when it does? Just an e-mail with the title would be enough.
neji
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June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
update already!!!!! Jeez u are slow u should just write the next chapter already. We are not getting any younger
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June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WELL I MUST SAY EVEN WITH ME BEING OPEING TO PEOPLE THAT ARE BI & GAY I STILL CANT SEE INU YASHA & MUROKU BEING THAT WAY
IM SORRY I TRIED & I THOUGHT ABOUT IT & THEY ARE TO MUCH OF A LADIES MAN TO BE THAT WAY . WELL ANYWAYS THANKS FOR THE STORY
TSCHUSS CLAUDINE
IM SORRY I TRIED & I THOUGHT ABOUT IT & THEY ARE TO MUCH OF A LADIES MAN TO BE THAT WAY . WELL ANYWAYS THANKS FOR THE STORY
TSCHUSS CLAUDINE
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June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit!!! i was not expecting that!!! omg... u have to update soon!!! i hav to find out wat inuyasha will think and stuff!!! oh god this is so dramatic and suspensful its insane!!! im gonna go insane, e-mail me wen u hav a new chappie out plz!!! my thing is
red_katty@hotmail.com
and by the way i luv ur story!!!
bye
bye
katty
red_katty@hotmail.com
and by the way i luv ur story!!!
bye
bye
katty
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June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Omg this is such a good story..poor Kagome though you really need to update soon though
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June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love the storie so far cant wait till u update
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June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Update now. Please hurry up and do it before I die .
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June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i really injoy readin your fic please update soon i wanna find out what happens
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May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a really awesome fanfiction!!!!!! Please continue your excellent work and update very soon.