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for Movie House Hanyou

by Numisma

person DoggyDooDoo
schedule May 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey. this story was recomended on Secrets from my past so I decided to check it out. I'm so glad I did. This is a great story. Can't wait to see what happens next. Kee the the great work! Update soon!


DoggyDooDoo
person emerald_miko36
schedule May 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, this is me.. again. Woah... who would've thought.. Inu being a bi... I'm kinna in shock right now so um plese excuse my rambelings... O yeah and you know what one of the evilness that will come in the fuure is? Waiting for an update.. *sigh* O well... take ur time!!
person emerald_miko36
schedule May 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey! Nice story! Um..err.. are you a guy or girl? Anyways... I love how it's starting out!! Is Inu gonna meet Kag in the next chapter? Is there gonna be a lime or lemon? Just wonderin! Oooo I Loooooove IT!!! CONTINUE THE STORY PLEASE!!!!
person emerald_miko36
schedule May 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oooo! great chappie!! Uh oh.. I wonder if she'll flip.. .. o yeah do you know Japanese? I can help you out with some sayins! But you probably already know them... O well!!

Vocab:
doshta ne: What's the matter?
Oi, ne: hey
daijabou: Are you okay?
nani: what
Ite: Ow
ohayo: good morning (add gozaimasu=polite)
chotto matte: Wait a bit
ano: pardon me, umm, errrmm, ehh (you get it right?)
ecchi, hentai:pervert
arigato:thank you
Do ita shimashite: you are welcome
oh..oh.. *looks at the list* gomen nasai.. I kinda got lost in the moment.. great story though!!!
person emerald_miko36
schedule May 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oooo!! Great chappie! Ya know this is the first itme, and I mean it, first time I've ever seen someone write a story about the inu couple working at a movie theater! I love the idea!! Keep up the good work!!
person emerald_miko36
schedule May 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*giggles*This chapter is funny!! well, the ending! And I thought that if YAsh sw Kagomea and Kohaku at the theater he would freak!!! ..hey that can be an idea for a chapter!! He he.. update soon!
person emerald_miko36
schedule May 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Kawaii~!! AWww... I wonder what evilness will come up in the future?
person emerald_miko36
schedule May 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Kawaii~!! AWww... I wonder what evilness will come up in the future?
person emerald_miko36
schedule May 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Kawaii~!! AWww... I wonder what evilness will come up in the future?
person YoukaiFate
schedule May 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story! Love the details and I like the flow...keep up the good work and update soon!

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