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alright, cool thanks! got it. nice chapter by the way;)

lol. I love that Inuyasha got pissed that Miroku was hitting on kag. I also loved that Miroku and Inuyasha got into the little fight about hight and comparing bodies.lol.

Ny Loves MHH

1. even though I'm a hard core Inu/Kag fastilstill thought the lime was great.
2. I loved the description of what kanna does.
3. Kagome falling was so funny!
4. I love this story.

..I'm not sure how this fic works, but it does. It DOES. o.o;
I didn't want to read it for the longest time. The summary is pretty un-cool sounding, to tell the truth. The premise sounds really stupid, and I admit that there are places where it's really hokey, and I hope that you meant it to be that way. (I still can't quite wrap my head around IY working at a movie theater. I really can't..)
But somehow, meshed with the.. sexual.. ickyparts.. and the sexual good parts, and the angst that's inheritaly IY's, this fic shines. o.o; I believed IY and Miroku as a once-le, le, and now f*ckbuddies. The most recent chapter's interlude between IY and Miroku read like a piece of 'Fear and Loathing in Las Vegas', and I LOVED it. I'm not even gay, and I loved it. O.o
I admit that I'm not really into the whole bondage/hurt thing, so I'm -hoping- that Kagome somehow changes IY, but knowing this fic it's not bloody likley. ;> That's great, though, 'cause it's uniquelyR stR story. It goes places where most wouldn't tred, for good reasons. ;> But for this story, somehow it comes together and works. You've got me keeping an eye out for updates. Bravo!

I really like your story, and I don'nt ynt you to take this as being an evil reviewer, just constructive criticism, but it seems like you talk about the details of working at the movie theater waaay too much. I end up just skimming through it all until I get to an actual plot point. It seems like you could really cut a lot of stuff and make the story tighter and more 'together,' polished sort of feel, you know? I know you're not writing it like an essay or anything, but as a reader I get really bored with all the description of cleaning poppers and how to do payroll, etc. I realize that some stuff is needed for the plot developement, but it just seems like too much detail, which is a really easy thing to do when it's on a subject you know a lot about (since you worked in a movie theater) Anyways, please don't be offended, I like your fic and I eagerly await updates. =)

the end was fun!
you really had me laughing there!

migi

Ah, you made me so happy!!! Totally not expecting another chapter so soon, so I was just so ...gratified...you know? Anyway, I really liked the whole sckiz with Naraku & co.; that's getting pretty exciting! I've always liked Nara...he's like, 'thoughtfully' evil. And the Baboon pelt....I'm sorry, if you can be sexy wearing a monkey costume, your mojo just DESERVES respect, you know what I'm sayin'? *_~ The whole 'writing what you know' bit makes a lot of sense when you read something this detailed. One of the most enjoyable benefits of reading anything is picking up random knowledge, and hearing about how things work behind the scenes in a theater is fairly interesting. The brux thing-that kinda messed me up. In a good way, but stillw, Iw, I'll never get rid of that. Things will go brux in the night.

Anyway, Thankyouthankyouthankyou for the ultra fast update, and for the intensly unique story. As usual, I was held in thrall. And the lime was very beautiful...very passionate and very tasteful...very hot. How-ev-ER... (Inuyasha. has. got. some. MAJOR. issues.) Whaa! Terribly interesting to read, and romantic as hell.....but I am still stressin for my poor little Kags. For someone who's never ridden before, you certainly did saddle her with a wild-ass mount....and I don't just mean that sexually. He's, ah....(winces slightly)...a helluva thing to cut your teeth on. @_@

owwwww! Poor kagome, i hope that she's gonna be alright. And if she's not, then inuyasha can take care of her. More soon please.

I haven't even finished reading the first chapter yet.....but i was laughing my tail off. I work at a movie theatre here in louisiana......we hwe have a light skinned black girl named Denise that works box office with me. Hahaha. I almost expected to hear see my boss DEMPSEY come up. HAHAHA. So farenjoenjoying your writing. very smooth and clear. good job.

wow, when you said lime, you got my hopes up for inu kag lime. Oh, well. I liked how you worked it into the story, though. It gave nice hints on Inu's past.
Am I assuming right when I assume that Miroku was Inu's first friend in this country. Cool. BTW, loved the extra long chapter. It was delicious. Though I hope
Kagome's injury isn't too long term....I wonder if Inu will drive her home, so that she doesn't have to walk to the bus stop. Also, I'm curious about what
Inu is implying about going on in the movie theater. I take it you worked in one or know someone who did, since you seem to know the rules and regulations pretty well.
Any how, update as soon as you can.

Nena