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for Movie House Hanyou

by Numisma

person Hanyou_Wicabeth
schedule June 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*giggles madly* Why do we have such a fetish for bondage and sexy dog hanyous? I love it!
person Tammy
schedule June 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I loved the lime!!! How the hell are they supposed to make it a whole year without having sex?!? If I was ever close enough to touch him, I wouldn't even be able to make it through a Public Service Announcement without having sex with Inuyasha. (Yeah, I am just going to whine about how long the ride is until we reach our desination, okay?) *chuckle*

Exploding coke syrup and spankings.

Gotta hand it to ya, that is just about as good as it gets without going the whole nine yards. I almost fell out of my chair! I'm like, "Where under the f-ing canopy does she come up with this shite?" But what killed ME is how our boy Yash is gonna throw a poor bitch into the shelving system and snarl "Vile Temptaion" at somebody like he didn't just instigate that entire situation. Ooooh, Nah-uh.

This story's the bomb. I've said it before and I'll say it again:...In a temple, 24 hours a day.

^_^ Tam
person ~A~
schedule June 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Update! Yay! Fluff! Yay! Thank you, more please! ^_^
person Hanyou_Wicabeth
schedule June 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
God, I'm loving this story so much! Koga actually reminds me of my ex. He walks around with a fox tail in his pants. -.-
But, I loved the whole Coke scene. Damn you! I want to read more! XD
person Dvalkyria
schedule June 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, great chapter as always. I wonder which was sweeter; the Coke or Kagome? Did you ever have one of those syrup bags explode on you? Would you even be allowed to stay at work or would you be sent home? Also, is Kouga a normal human or a wolf demon? Judging by the fake tail, I'd say he's a human, but it's always good to have clarification. Will InuYasha be the only non-human character in the story? I'm just full of questions. I loved this chapter since we got to see how much Kags and Inu really like each other. Inu likes being whipped and Kagome likes being spanked, right? Guess all they need now is the bondage stuff. I say just give 'em a bed and a pair of handcuffs. They'll do the rest. Hope to see the next chapter soon.
One more question. Is Naraku only swindling money from Pierce Theaters? If he is, don't say what else he is doing because not saying will get our imaginations running wild.
person Dvalkyria
schedule June 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice updates. Even though I'm not a fan of the yaoi parts, I'm still really enjoying this fic. The detail is especially good. I'm highly awaiting the next installments to this wonderful story. Your story is even making me think about writing a story alont the same lines as yours but it would take place after my life. Updated soon.
person akuma_river
schedule June 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Love the story so far. Keep up the good work.
person drake220
schedule June 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey. great chapter with that little lime to tide us over! sweet and sexy! also, those drawings- ::whistles:: whoo, turn down the heat! its too much for me! LOVED THOSE PICS! inu's face was a tad square but more realistic looking, less manga. and that pic where she just missed drawing his area?? OMFG! WHOA! sweet unholy imagaination, what that pic brought to mind! send the artist my compliments!
schedule June 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I probably should have reviewed this 9 other times by now for each chapter. I'm just a lazy ass and never remember to login so I can review good stories. I say do whatever the hell pleases you and if SOME dont like the descriptiveness, screw em. Just like that. Write what pleases you the most, personally I like that touch of realism and it makes me feel like I'm there. After working four months of hell in the wal mart deli I KNOW what they feel like in this fic, and how you must have felt in that movie theatre. Keep up the great work, continue as descriptive as you feel necessary. You're a great author and this story rocks.
person feh-yasha
schedule June 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey Num my girl!!! AWESOME STORY!!! This is Feh from the AFF Writer's Group Chat by the way ^_~ I was finally able to find some time to catch up with MHH. Let me tell you girl, I LOVE IT! Such a different story. I can't wait to see what happens next. I can totally relate to what Kagome and Inuyasha are going through with useless coworkers, evil managerserviervisors, idiotic customers and so forth. Being in the restuarant business is incredibly similar to the happenings of a theater.

But anyway I got a couple of other things on my mind. If you recall the conversation we were having the other night in the chat about the BDSM lifestyle, we talked quite a bit that sort of fetish lifestyle. You'll be happy to hear (at least I think you will be lol) that I've done some research into that area, and find myself wanting to learn even more, find someone to play with, and maybe give this fetish a tryout or two *hentai grin*.

As for your incredibly hot and gorgeously gothed out Inuyasha thank you so much! Every time I pass a bishie goth guy here in B'more I try to picture him as Inuyasha. *drool* and so far I've found some wonderful Inu wanna be's here! The little whip scene in the parking lot is HOT, I can't imagine what a full blown session between the two of them is going to be like *shiver* Also, the scene between Miroku and Inuyasha...damn girl! And I don't particularly care for yaoi scenes! That was so erotic, I think I can begin to understand why its such a turnon...

But anyway hope to chat with you soon in the chat and I NEED for you to hurry up and update soon!!!

Luv your hentai fangirl,

Fay-yasha

PS if you ever want to chat IM or I'm not in the chat that night and Mom is around ask her my screen name and she can give it to you. Or you can email me. I would love to chat sometime!