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That was a bizzar chapter...confusing, but definitely insightful about INu's character.

hey! i just started reading your story, and i really like it! at first i thought that i would be weirded out but, i wasnt (yay!) i wanted to say that it is really good! but i also wanted to know why inuyasha thinks that he "can't touch" kagome. isnt it only against the law to have sex if she is a minor? but then again, its your storyi was just wondering. keep writing! and post the next chapter soon!

Numisma: I think it would be best to tell you this, but if people want, they can add chapters to your fanfic! Right next to 'Nest Chapter' is a green button than anyone can press and add a chapter without you knowing. You can fix it by going to 'edit story', pick the story you want to edit, and click on story. (you want to edit the story settings themselves) near the bottom is a place that for you says 'yes' switch it to 'no'. You can still add chapters when it is on 'no' but other peopannoannot.

This is like, the golden review. I want you to know that. I had to murder a spider to write it.

Okay, 92 hits and one review???!!!! Come on, people!!! Can't we do better than that?

Anyway, I have already reviewed this on mm, but could not stand one lonely review, so I reread and am reviewing here, too. I can't believe the emotional trauma Inuyasha is experiencing.....It's nearly surreal if you try to imagine what he must be thinking to resort to trying to beat himself into submission. I have trouble believing that the Kikyo thing is the driving influence behind this....well, capture and being found out and halfish-ness shame and whatnot. But it is still sort of murky for me trying to clearly see where all of this is coming from. Is there something deeper, or is there some special way this is melding together....? (If I am missing your point all together, then you have to forgive me since you know how Gump-ish I am. Just hand me a brownie and tell me to shut up.) Is Kagome going to pop up with some self-disciplinary activity next, or will she be discovering Inuyasha's??? What will practically a year of this Pavlovian painfest type deterrent do to the attraction/affection Inu feels toward 'Gome? And how is he going to continue with Jak after that total shakedown!? I don't know if I would be pissed off or afraid......you certainly made Jakotsu a force to be reckoned with.


I am so curious. I wish that I could read like the next ten chapters.

If I die before you finish this, my ghost is going to haunt your computer room. (Did you like that movie, 'The Fan'? Just curious....o.o)










Mwahahaha! I have a sick sense of Humor.


P.s.: Abthe the whole 'outliving everyone' thing.....when he says he wanted to make her HIS, in the preamble, it gives you the feeling he is making a definite separation of his previous loves from Kagome. *Or so I thought* Does this mean that there is some way for this to be avoided? The whole highlander syndrome thing??? I hate the thought of Inu outliving Kag. Hate it.

Anyway, I have asserted my nonsense for long enough. Ja, my brilliant, beloved Numisma!!!! *waves*

Love it. especially the Inuyasha is bi thing. When done right, as you have, these unusual pairings (as in, lesbian and gay pairings) are quite enjoyable to read. please continue! Cheers

I just want to state for the record, that lately trying to get a review up is like trying to pour the Dead Sea into a juice tumbler.

Anyway,....another installment of my fave-o-rite story....Yay!!!!! Looks like Inu is having a little trouble with himself. I can understand lusting after someone, and I can understand the need to be careful in those 'delicate little situations' alot of us find ourselves in from time to time, but he is really stringent, ne? I mean, damn, I can understand the fun of punishment, but I am a little perplexed with this newest developement. He actually wants PUNISHMENT punishment, or seems to feel that he needs it. I don't understand beating one's self up like that over a perfectly natural reaction. Yeah, so she is technically to young, and he could get arrested. But they should be fine. She won't fall onto his cock or anything. But he is just freakin" the fuck out in a way that makes it seem to me that there is more to it than I already know.

Did Kikyo give my boy a complex or something? WTF?

She messes everything up, no matter what dimension she's in....I detest her with the frost of ten thousand winters.


But seriously, whassup with that madness??? And Jak! How Fun!!!! He cracks me up every time! I have a great deal of trouble trying to picture Inu bottoming for Jak, however....I really don't think Jakkotsu could break him down. There's too much fight in the dog, if you know what I am saying. I know that he is going there to specifically have it done, but I can't help it, they keep switching spots everytime I try to think it through. I just can't see Inuyasha knuckle under no matter how noble the cause.* But I would like to be proven wrong * *leer*

Well, until the next jaw-slackening installment, Ja!

*_~

I promised myself that the first time you mentioned VNV Nation, I'd post a review and tell you how much I love you.

I love you so very very very much. This is one of the first fanfictions that I've ever read where they used the word "goth" and it actually resembles the scene I frequent. Yasha dresses a little over the top, but it's cool, I know a few guys who dress over the top when we're not going clubbing.

but DUDE!! You mentioned Seabound and VNV and you quoted Iris... I love you. Oh and when my best friend Amy gets new harddrive, she drew a lovely picture of Kagome topping Inuyasha that I have to show you!! Mostly because she thought of the idea when I recalled the part of your story when Inuyasha has Kagome beat him with the riding crop. But she's only drawn it in pencil, she has to ink it and scan it and all that other lovely stuff.... and she has to wait until the new harddrive comes in.

Hurry up and make the year pass by!!! I'm gonna explode before Yasha does!!!

*squishes*
Isis

wow, its been a while since ive reviewed. yay! fluff, i loved that part. lol, jakotsu as a dom? thats hillarious, but not unbelievable. love how its going, update soon.

Another wonderful chapter. It's going to be a long time before Kagome turns 18, isn't it? *pouts* Too bad I don've ave a dom to go to like InuYasha does. Although, I'm not too sure I would put myself through that much pain just to control my sexual desires. *hands Inu a couple copies of Playboy, Penthouse, and a La Blue Girl DVD* Now he should have no reason to run back to the creepy gay guy. Now, if Kagome liked it when InuYasha spanked her, isn't that just more encouragement for her try something again? I think we need to go to Congress and have them pass a bill that does away with statutory rape if it is between consenting individuals. It's really stupid that the United States has such a law when hardly anyer cer countries in the world have it. I guess we still see all persons under the age of 18 as stupid and ignorant, not capable of making any important decisions. I'm rambling now, but seeing as how my brother nearly got sent to prison for this same thing, I thought it was important to note.
On the side, what was the first step you took towardstingting your stories? I keep coming up with tons of ideas, but I have so many that I'm not sure what to start on. Care to comment?

Taking the bait that this story is partly based on your own experiences at a movie theatre, I would have to say that you probably handled your GM call down better than I did...though I saved the good stuff for later in the back, when I talked to my manager privately. Well, if you can call "polite bitching" and "let's talk about our role rules" a way to deal...and a definite move-on toward other and better things when the "talk" didn't help. ;)

I just finished the last two chapters, and I have to hand it to you---you're one of the best authors I've ever come across. pop-pop-explosion had me choking on the Coke I was drinking...let's just say I've been-there-done-that...though I would have preferred a bit of InuYasha licking myself (grin)...and the spanking was HOT. (Fans self...now I need ice water.) And Jakotsu as a dom!!! ROFL...fell out of my chair with that one! Your leap of imagination has completely outstripped mine...though the thought of Inu bottoming to Jakotsu...shiver...just not my forte...maybe to someone else. Jak's just so...shrug. Can't see the difference between Inu bottoming for a woman rather than a womanly Jak. Still, I have to give you your props. Excellently written, and I can't wait for more!

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