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Wonderful chapter Num!!! I bow to the mistress of evil cliff hangers. Kagome and Inuyasha can't seem to catch a break. I totally agree with you on the comments that Inuyasha fired back at Wiley. I live in a large metropolitan city and I hear that kind of language all the time. It's offensive and derogatory and NO one should say it. Love Inuyasha's answer to Kagome on if he regreted what they did in the stock room. Interesting combination of scenes. Can't wait for more!

Fay_yasha

Ohhh man I remember the curfew thing too.... *sighs* Though I had my moms car... Ohhh I cant wait to find out what happens next!! your an amazing writer.

I am seriously enjoying you fic right now and when ever i have the time to get on AFF i always look for your work it makes my day ^^

cool me like but i wanted to see more inu/kag interaction maybe next chap huh? oh well update soon.

Yet another excellent chapter. i almost fell out of my chair laughing with the "Look, Ma! No fangs!" Still got the deep chuckles... :) Poor Kags! What a day! Ugh! I would raise up my hands in defeat and howl to the moon over THAT one. And I thought the way Inu and Kag handled that little rascist *bleep* was excellent. And to top it off, being pulled aside by a cop! Growl! Poor baby, I would be scared as all heck walking around downtown anywhere that late at night, only 17 and by myself! And doesn't she have school in the morning? Granted, it's her last day, but I'd be a walking zombie. Hope Jamar gets a good write up as well, and I hope that cop will take a bit of pity on her, and Drive her , no, not just give her a ticket...oh, and now that your eyes are all boggled over this totally long irrevelant review, I just loved the Japanese add-on of InuYasha's...the words under translation were actually sweet, and I love the fact that the tough nut has a bit of a soft underbelly...lol. Good job and update soon!
YoukaiFate

This one of my faves. I like still one because you never know what is going to happen. In this last chapter I was hoping that Inuyasha would come along and make sure that she got home alright. I wonder what will happen to her now that Jamal ( I think that was the guy's name) made her stay late and now the police has stopped her.

I liked this chapter a lot but it held me in utter suspense. I want to know dnuyanuyasha excercise his Kikyou "demons" or if not, is this what's pushing him to his limits with Kagome? Are his fears of being alone (among other things that were outlined heavily in FFF) the motivating factor behind everything he does concerning her and his relationships? Is the drug use more than just "recreational"? I sense there is more going on here bualmoalmost feel like I missing "it" in some ways. Kagome I feel is almost oblivious to the torment he is in concerning her, and she is NO dummy. And now I'm wondering about Yash's ex that freaked out and dumped him, and what was the deal with he and Zara? And the relationship/friendship with Miroku and why it was a temporary set-up? There is so much going on here and I guess I better keep reading...

Another good chapter from one of my fav stories-

ja ne!

y'know something? i'm okay with m/m, f/m, f/f scenes but that drugs thing? totally freaked me out. just couldnt get into it. are you gonna be doing more of those scenes? they just make me uncomfortable. now, i'm not flaming you! i'm just expressing an opinion.

My god! No interaction between Kagome and InuYasha at all in this chapter?! No sexual tension or desires to be bound and whipped?! But it was informative. KagoKagome trying to get into the box because she would rather work there or is it part of InuYasha's plan? I 't r't remember that being mentioned previously, so I just felt like asking. And boy was Inu f*cked up. I've never been high before (don't do drugs), but I know that at least one of my brothers has. I'll have to ask him how out of it he was. When you said that it was Kikyou at the front door, I had about the same reactions as Inu did. Stupid bitch that she is. Great chapter though, but next spring is so far away. They actually going to be able to last that long? I'm not sure I can.

You know I love the story. Still depressed but the jokes in this chapter made me smile.

:o)


~Ny~