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ooh wow Num I loved the new chapter, I tried to lea rea review here when I read the last one but I guess it got cut off or something..lol...loving the whole Inu being stoned off his ever loving mind..lmaoo soo funny seeing the girls as marienettes lol...and what Sango and Chels did was too funny, again loved the last two chaps they were wonderfull and I cant wait for more, I worrworried it would be longer before you updated but I am very very happy to know you did and read it...poor Kags soo wrong for minorities to call other minorities hatefull words, its totally silly and dumb really, and I can say that cause I am a minority, hehe Im hispanic, latin, mexican what ever one wishes to call me, hehe and I find it really sad when one minority calls another a racist name, just makes them racist and if you think you cant be a racist cause your black or mexican or what ever then your wrong I know alot of them, soo sad really...sigh anyhow great work and cant wait for another chapter..till then you be well safe and happy much huggles and smiles your fan and friend Mija..:-)

ooh and on a side note I laughed my freakin ASS off when he thought it was Kikyo at the door...I spit out my soda it was too funny...........just had to add that....and btw I just left a review but didnt see it and wondered what happens to the reviews you get and theres no more room on the first page thingy?? cause it looks like you ran outta room and cant get no more reviews..hell I never saw that happen before but thats what it looks like to me...you go girl...

So, if this story is based upon your employment for a year, does that mean that you also had an affair with your boss? Don't have to answer since it's a personal question. Just thought I'd ask. Those police officers can be real bitches when it comes to enforcing curfew. I haven't been caught here in Clarksville, Tennessee, but my brother and his friends have fromfrom the cops a few times because they were violating curfew ^_^! Will Inu come to Kagome's rescue? Or will she be left at the cop's mercy? Next time on Movie House Hanyou!? Cross training does help on getting higher promotions. I'm just starting my new position as a stockroom supervisor after being a sales associate for 9 months. The store manager is giving me hints that this position will help me to eventually become a store manager or even a district manager. Love the chapters. Keep 'em coming please. I'm hoping to have my first story pushed out by next week.

Another wonderous chapter.

And gosh dang it you are getting to be like me with the cliffys.

Hehehe I love to write them hate to read them.

Can't wait for next chapter.


~Ny~

Wow, was surprised to see another chapter so soon, but then you did say you shortened Chap 13, no?
Really enjoyed this chapter, things seem to be picking up a bit more now that you've established characters and setting.
I was expecting something to happen on her walk home, but not the police! Crazy, I have nea wea what'll happen next. I don't know much about legal curfews, can Kagome get into trouble for this?
I look forward to seeing what happens next, and, again, I'm happy you like the picture!!!

Finally!! Something good happens!!! MHH is updated....for a while there, I thought nothing in life was going to improve I w I would just end up throwing myself from the top of the Foshay Tower. But like a good friend, you have saved my life. Let it never be said that fanfiction has no place in the world.

Inuyasha....it really is a shame that he is fictional. Could you imagine the retardedly fabulous sexual goodness of having a boyfriend who changed from hanyou to human one night a month? The weird little games you could play? It would be like shagging a different person. >_< *boggles the, er....mind?* Yeah, well.....

(What's this with you accusing me of giving the other kids bad ideas.....I'm injured! You should be more careful with my feelings; you know what a delicate, sensitive person I am.)

I can't help it....I am just itchng with questions! I don't want to be rude and email them tu. u. (I know you're not going to tell me!) I don't want to spoil the story for myself either. It's just so FUCKING HARD to wait for it. BTW, I keep re-reading FFF; the end of it just breaks my heart....but I gotta tell ya, from a avid reader/writer's standpoint, it really impresses me when people build so much contrast into a character's emotional life. He is angry, and moody, slick and seductive, rebelious yet uptight...but he is so Human! Humanity is hard to convey. I had an Engish teaher in college who used to tell us that when you could convey humanity you were ready to publish. So, I love Inu. Inu is complex, but not overly so, and the situation is too,...so the fact that he is such a study of contrasts and that he is such a high energy character makes it totally addictive to read. And THEN you throw in the fact that you just don't see something this original in IY fanfic everyday and there you go....see why it's my favorite story!!! BUT you can also SO tell that Inu is your favorite baby. He is like !whoa! so much more developed than your other characters in this story. He does more, says more, gives more insight and is far more compelling than anyone else in MHH. Okay, I should shut up since I am no Hemingway, and probaly boring your pants off. I just get on these kicks where I feel like I never saythinthing useful, so then I try and it iceskates into massive overkill. (Blah, blah, Tammy rattles on forever and the audience nods off....)

*grins* And you can tell Del-Kaiden that I am totally jealous of her. It sounds like she has a mad-ass scoop!! What's in chapter 21? Ahhhhhh! Sometimes I wish I could be cryogenically frozen until you were finished with this story, so that I could read it all at once. If you look up the term instant gratification, my picture is next to it and I am wearing a tee-shirt that says 'fan-club president.' Hand to mouth, Hand to mouth.

I love your writing & I love this story. *end of review*

Until we meet again!!! ~ Tam

Hey,

Great chapter... boy my Japanese is increasing by reading this story.... I was actually able to use Chotto baka da na... my pronunciation most likely sucked But they didn't know that... lol. Poor Kagome, in trouble... Ok let's see you said the party was in Chapters 18 & 19 SO that means.. 4 more? then what Chapter 21 for that little gem? Evil Grin!

I'll get you the picture as soon as she gets herself a new harddrive.. believe me, it's driving me insane cause she doesn't have one yet.

Her DV account name is mayokekumiko, but I really have no clue what she has up there.

Is Kagome any closer to turning 18 yet!!! You're killing me here!!!!

And JEBUS! Cop... total motherfuck...

*grins* we had a fetish ball at the club tonight, it made me think of you!

*squish*
Isis

Hey, I've been following your story since chapter 12 came out, and I have to say, it's one of the better storiesm i've read. I just have one question, Do you live in Minnesota? Because I do, and it would be great to meet a fellow Inu fan who actually lives in the same state as me. If you do, (live in mn that is) email me. Diamondgirl1989@msn.com. Also, will you respond to this on your next chapter? thanx.

much huggles,
Juls

great chapter with a cliffy! yay! but i have to agree, kag is a minor, she does need to grow a backbone. she should have been more firm with that umar guy. it was so obvious he was way out of his bounds asking her to stay so late. serves her right for getting picked up by the cops, she should have been more responsible to herself.