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for Movie House Hanyou

by Numisma

person ~A~
schedule July 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay, for update, your story is still awesome. ^_^ I want to find out what happens with Inuyasha and Kagome! X/
person lilladyINUfan
schedule July 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Are u ever gonna update or wat?!?!?!
This is taking forever!!!
Ack! plz hurry
person lilladyINUfan
schedule July 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
---gets on her knees and begs---
PLZ UPDATE I BEG OF U
I LOOOOOVE THIS STORY
person MidnightKitsune
schedule July 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WAAAAAAAAAah!!! I love this ficcie but i wish youd update it!
*gets all teary eyed*
because this is the most origional fic i have read so far and you are an absolute genius for creating it!
so pretty pretty pretty please update for me??!!!!!!

Lovee your very faithful reader,
kitsune
person lilladyINUfan
schedule July 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WHEN IN HELL R U GONNA UPDATE?!?!?!?!?!
im eager to read this story
I WANT LEMONS
its still getting closer to kagomes b-day
is she gonna find out his secret
plz update soon
i dunno when ill be able to read it tho cuz im not even on my comp. right now
my comp. is fucked up
person YoukaiFate
schedule July 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another good chapter! I absolutely love the little details, like Naraku smudging the quarter. I believe keeping up with them divides an author/story from good to great. Deep bow! And I liked how InuYasha did a bit of the fang-growl at Jak...still have the shivers over Jak topping Inu, but at least Inu put the little fe-male in his place. Lol! And Naraku with his bat...man needs a Prozac. Or maybe a good scene with Jak...devil's grin.

I'm beginning to feel Inu's need for Kagome. I hope she can boost his ego up. The guy needs her.
person Mija
schedule July 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
omg Naraku is nuts, he needs his ass whooped..I mean they dont allow bosses to physically hurt someone do they?? damn hes an ass...lol another wonderfull chap Num, loved it and cant wait for the next one, till then much huggles and smiles Mija...:-)
person nena
schedule July 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ISN'T ANYONE GOINT TO CALL THE COPS. Maybe is because I'm from NY, but if that were to happen here, he would be in jail for aggrivated assult, and both allen and jr would have legal cases against the company, plus they could sue for racism. Kagome could also file a harrassment complaint. We don't have curfews over here, but if we did, you know that the movie theater would have been fined. But this is NY and we sue and fine to our heart's content. Plus, I'm surprise her mother didn't go there and rip him a new one.

Otherwise, this was an edge of your seat chapter, th I' I'm beginning to feel sorry for Inu
person Ninoshka
schedule July 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great story. Update soon as possible okay
person drake220
schedule July 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey. what the hell is a prole? also, good chapter. the inu/kag thingi at the end was enjoyable. about your friends artwork, tobe perfectly honest, it looks like he's sticking a tongue depressor (those thingfs the doctors use to take your throat culture) into her ear. a tongue should be more flexible looking, more curved and her head should be tilted a bit. update asap!