rate_review Reviews

great story although sometimes you get a little too technical like when you talked about kanna setting up the projectors but otherwise your story is very good

I love your story, its kinky!! ^_^ can't wait to see how it plays out!!

Nothing to say other than I Love this story!! Update soon!!

hey! you updated!! hurray! my fav part was the violet wand sequence with the ints not fair that connected to kagome's fusturation? i liked that a lot!!

ooh Num another wonderfull chap I sooooooo loved it I soo cant wait for more, the more I read this the more addictive it becomes for me, I cant wait till they finally go at it, I mean Inu is probablly frustrated as hell and I can bet Kags is as well, lol..ooh update soon please.???? much huggles and smiles your fan and friend Mija..:-)

please PLEASE tell me someone is working on a pic for that scene! i need one, my imagination needs feeding! they finally got the talk out of the way. congrats for kag adn inu! and for gods sake, he should stop expecting her to be so mature about this: she's 17 dumbass. give me a mature 17 year old and i'll give you someone whose had major difficulties in life. thats the only way to get a mature teenager. (harsh but true) good chapter and yay for you for updating!

XD! I love this fic! It's really neat to read a fic (that's actually superbly written) about the city I live in! I live about 5 minutes walking from Lake Harriet. When i read the story i'm like "OMG I KNOW WHERE THAT IS!" quite pathetic, ne? I really like how you use full sentences in Japanese and not just "baka" and "hentai" every once in a while like a lot of stories do...that can get quite old after a while. Keep updating when you get the chance! Thanks so much!
-Neku

Great as ever! And, I don't know what possessed me to write this, but, regular white paste toothpaste helps burns better than practically anything. *shrugs* In case you want to try it on Kagome or something. Little trick I picked up from my aunt who's a baker and burns herself on a regular basis.

And, I am SO getting that shirt.

Good chapter. I absolutely loved the whole situation over inu's 'hentai and proud of it' shirt and his jacket, too...it was hilarious. I also liked thinking of inu as a go go dancer...*drool* But I know a lot of us probably do to...lol! Can't wait for the next update!!

Much love,
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Another excellent chapter. I'm still debating if this fic is the #1 or #2 fic on the internet right now. "Falling For The Babysitter" (on mm.org) is my other contender. Nothing about this fic is bad (except for the long wait for Kagome to not be jailbait). The detail is superb. The grammar is excellent. The tid-bits of lime/romance keep up the action. The questions of what Naraku is doing add suspense. And Naraku's actions make you tell yourself "This is some fucked-up shit going on here." It's nice to see that you had Kag and Inu finally have their little talk and that InuYasha told her about Kikyou. Is Kikyou going to be making an appearance in this fic? I don't really care to see her *cough*becauseshe'sabitch*cough*, but if it adds to the story, and doesn't extend it, then throw it in there for us to enjoy. She better not get Inu in trouble though.