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Wow, so awesome! Really well written chapter, I feel like everything's finally coming together after waiting so long and it's so wonderful! I'm glad you had Kagome overhear about Inuyasha and Jakotsu and find out about his ears, but what an evil cliffie! I'm waiting on the edge of my seat to find out what will happen. Yay! ^_^ And thanks for making this chapter so long. =) Please update again soon.

NNNNNNOOOOOO!!!!! That was cruel! Awful! Terrible! Nasty! Damn all cliffie writers to Hell's Kitchen!!!! That was WRONG, Numisma!!!! How could you? I can't believe you left off THERE! Howl! (Gods, I'm turning into Koga.) You HAVE to update, and please, God, puh-leaz don't leave me hanging for yet another wee weeks!!! I don't care if you have to sleep and live life and all of that. MY life cannot go on without knowing what the PICKLES is going to happen!!!

Okay, enough dramatics. (For now). I swear, I'll be posting some real pleady-beggy threatening emails within two days if I don't see an update. I do want to add that I still love your writing...heck, you even made that Koga/Inu intimidation scene sexy. =P And skillfully handled Kagome overhearing Jakotsu...grin. Wonder what InuYasha will have to say when all is brought into the light.

Take care, and update soon... (readying my own cat o' nine tails with evil smirk...)

Fate

WOW I hadn;t read in a while, and I find myself in this bomb shell. I'm glad it's happening. This has been an amazing three chapters. LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!L!!!LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!E ITE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE AS SOON AS YOU CAN. I love the cliffie!!!1

well it was actually a picture on mediaminer that finally got me to read this. It seems interesting. And I plan to give the next chapter a shot. Your writing is very good and the story idea rocks!

Oooohhhh. Aaaaaaaaahhhhhhhh. Update, update!! It's been a while hasn't it? I can understand why though. This chapter seemed a bit harder to write than the previous ones. Kagome is finally going to find out about InuYasha in the next chapter, right? Will it tear them apart? It better not *gives author the "evil eye"*. I really, really liked this chapter (are there any that can't be liked?). It seemed like you were setting up for this party from early on, but I didn't realize how much would actually happen. I just loved the warnings that Inu gave to Kouga. He made it sound so nice, but also very terrorizing. Kind of like when he talks to Myouga on the show. Jakotsu seemed to be his regular dumbass by blurting out client information that he shouldn't have (I just wish Adult Swim would get to his episodes because I really don't know what he looks like). I don't think that Inu did enough damage to Hiten. He should have taken that stun gun and attached it to Hiten's balls. That might teach him to never try to rape someone again. I can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon.

Also, congratulations on the stories nomination. It is definitely well deserved. "Falling for the Babysitter" hasn't been updated in a few weeks, so this story is the best one going on all fanfiction sites in my opinion. Love.

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!HOW COULD YOU LEAVE AT SUCH A CLIFHANGER ;.; THAT WAS SO MEAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

update...........now........

omg that was sooooooo good Num you must write more and soon I know your really busy but I just have to read what happens next, ooh this was soo good I soo cant wait for an update till then you be well safe and good, much huggles and smiles Mija..:-)

whoo-hoo! you updated! hurrayd wid with such a great chapter as well! kagome finding out the truth (or starting to), sango getting into a fight. i felt so bad for kagome, inu adn everyone watching when she tried to kiss him. it wo...o....pathetic. ::wince:: how many chapters are there left? just curious. update soon!!

*Squeaks* InuYasha...on Kouga's lap...I...mentals goooood. *huffs a bit and fans face* Oi, what I wouldn't give to have Yasha on MY lap...Without the threats of death and maiming and all the gory stuff. Ahem. Leaving UST filled glaze, now..

I absoloutly adored it when InuYasha ed Ked Kagome his 'little girl', and him explain to Kouga that she would be his woman...well, lets just say visions of naked Yasha and Gome danced through my head all naked and sweaty to tto the beat of "Closer to God". God bless NIN, such lovely mentals I get...anywho.

WHee for tazers! Hiten got his ass kicked, molesting a passed out Kagome...InuYasha going nuts on him was just...great. Kagome had the right idea-after seeing that I'D try to molest his ass...

And she has discovered his ears! Or lack there of...I'm already on pins and needles for the next chapter. The explination is going to be to die for, I can tell, and I can't wait to see Kagome's reaction!

Pleasepleasepleasegiveuseargroping!

and just a note...the idea of Kouga as a fuzzy is fucking hilarious. Midly scarring, but hilarious just the same. I keep seeing him dressed as the big bad wolf chasing Yura around...O.o Creepy

I shall stop my inane rambling now, and leave you with this: I worship you. I love you. I adore you...Oh, and as the Hentai girl I am...Smut? Soon? Just a little? *whimper tear* Need smuuuuuut.....XD No, I need a life, but bah, who cares.

Much Love,
Cat

great story so far, really interesting, update as soon as possible.