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I have been following your story on ff but found that to to be a little slow so when I found your story on this site I switched to here. Sorry to hear that someone is harrazing you but don't lessen to them. Your story is great and I understand the value of receiving reviews. It is annoying at times when people read and don't tell you how you are doing. So I make it a point to leave a review. I'm very honest when I say that your story is great. I usually can't wait until you post again. I love the way this story is progressing and hope that you continue to the end. Keep up the great work and update soon. I look forward to reading your next chapter!

Thanks for the story!

Cindy

hey this is great i love this stiry soooooooooooooo ,uch i do wish u could update faster but im glad that u ahev long chapters and they r very detailed and graphic. this is my absolute favoright story in this entire place. please please please update soon

I don't think my review for chapter 20 was actually posted, so I'll review both chapters (20 & 21) now. And it'll be a simple review: Loved it, loved it, loved it. Whew, lady, you have some awesome talent for tender lime scenes. I bawled and cackled and gulped ice water throughout both chapters, and now I'm dying for more. Will April ever come? Sigh. That bit about Sesshoumaru gave me the shivers...hope he did survive. Another thing that makes me shiver is Shuska (sp?) sing-songing all over the place and being so delighted about Kagome working in the box office. Is that sick perv going to make a move? Ugh. *brightening* But then, perhaps, IY will be making some moves too. Delightful thought. Shivering for a whole 'nother reason. n_n

Can't wait for more...

Fate

You have absolutely no idea how happy I am that you updated. Your grammar is superb, your writing style easy and enjoyable
to read, and the story itself absolutely wonderful. You don't rush to the lemon, but give us enough to make us happy which is
a feat in and of itself. Even though the story is in a mundane setting, you make it feel as if it is an action fic. I would like your
permission to put this story on my website as soon as it's construction is completed. Take all the time you need to write another
quality chapter. Just know that I am only putting up copleted stories. It will take awhile for the site to be finished, so I am in
no hurry. Wouldn't want the quality of your work to suffer. Plee-mae-mail a response to my request.

Thank you for such a wonderful read.

Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave

i am so glad they are ok, I hope you really get to her b-day quick, I feel sorry for her. Good chap, what did IY do to Ban and Jak?

Hi ::WAVES HAND ::
I absoulutly ADORE your story. It is the BEST one I have read. I love it. Please continue... I hope you update soon...::LOOKS AT YOU WITH PUPPY DOG EYES::
Oh and would you return the favor and maybe review one of my stories. I have 8. They are Karate hanyou, The Dare, The Monk Ball, College days, Model attraction, Lovers united, One Last Wish, and Endings. I'd love it SOOOO MUCH if you reviewed my stuff.

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LOVES YA ~*~ ME~*~

First, I like how you have so many details. This story is the first ture original I have seen dealing with fa. I . I can believe all of this is happening.

Second, I appreciate that you have the nereve to describe InuYasha and Miroku as bi-sexuals. As someone has has finally admitted this aloud after years of denying it, I thank you, thank you, thank you.

Please keep this story going. I am anxiously awaiting to see what Naraku is up to.

First, I like how you have so many details. This story is the first ture original I have seen dealing with fanfic. I can believe all of this is happening.

Second, I appreciate that you have the nereve to describe InuYasha and Miroku as bi-sexuals. As someone who has finally admitted this aloud after years of denying it, I thank you, thank you, thank you.

Please keep this story going. I am anxiously awaiting to see what Naraku is up to.

um. Excuse me, please, but when o when are you going to update?????

It's been a week.

I know on my own stories it takes a month before I update, but that's because I'm not really that good of a writer, and I have to say that obviously isn't true about you, so please, when will you update?

I need more of this story.

Please?

I love your story, the plot is extremly captivating. I always find myself waiting like an impaitent child for the next chapter. You have a good talent, keep using it!!!!!