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October 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well Well. This made me week. I wasn't expecting a new chapter anytime soon. This was an interesting chapter. Has only 4 months past since the beginning of the story? I was a little confused about that. Well keep up the good work. And update soon. You definatly spoiled me with thie quick update.
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October 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad you updated. I've been waiting very patienty (or as patiently as a fan can) for this update.
You left such a good cliffie, that I was dying to know what happened next. I was surprised you didn't have Kagome and her mother talk about her night
Though, I must give you props. That scene in the bedroom with Kagome sitting behind INu Yasha kissing him and having her little confession was heartwarming,
and his 180 into telling her how he feels before turning the situation completely sexual was hot. Update as soon as you can.
You left such a good cliffie, that I was dying to know what happened next. I was surprised you didn't have Kagome and her mother talk about her night
Though, I must give you props. That scene in the bedroom with Kagome sitting behind INu Yasha kissing him and having her little confession was heartwarming,
and his 180 into telling her how he feels before turning the situation completely sexual was hot. Update as soon as you can.
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October 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wheeeee! Some juicy emotional and relationship stuff in this chapter, with deconstruction of common lemon cliche an an added bonus. I chortled at the whole "youkai mating mark" conversation... Great job, can't wait to rmoremore.
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October 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, Num!
Thank you so much for updating! You managed to make it this week so I'll take it as a birthday present *lol You have no idea how much I wanted to read this chapter, I knew there would be some action *hint hint* I even made a bet with my friends about chapter 21... and I won! *does the happy dance* We also made another bet: those two won't wait til Kagome's 18 birthday... O_o I lothisthis chapter (not only for the Inu/Kag interaction); the bass scene was hilarious *lol* Velvet??!! O_o
As for the harasser, just ignore it... Readers in FF.net tend to be more immature *sigh* And if you did well in the IYFG polls, you truly deserve it cuz this story just kick ass! Please continue with the excellent work and just don't let the comments of obviously jelaous idiots get you...
Your loyal fan,
Maggz
Thank you so much for updating! You managed to make it this week so I'll take it as a birthday present *lol You have no idea how much I wanted to read this chapter, I knew there would be some action *hint hint* I even made a bet with my friends about chapter 21... and I won! *does the happy dance* We also made another bet: those two won't wait til Kagome's 18 birthday... O_o I lothisthis chapter (not only for the Inu/Kag interaction); the bass scene was hilarious *lol* Velvet??!! O_o
As for the harasser, just ignore it... Readers in FF.net tend to be more immature *sigh* And if you did well in the IYFG polls, you truly deserve it cuz this story just kick ass! Please continue with the excellent work and just don't let the comments of obviously jelaous idiots get you...
Your loyal fan,
Maggz
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October 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WONDERFUL CHAPPIE!!! I have no constructive criticism for you. You are...good...better than good. You rock my socks. And I will personally hunt down the bastard who is harassing you and kill him/her. I will stab said person with the Mighty Spork of Justice! *holds her spork high* I will defend your honor!
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October 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love your story! You have a great talent for writing so please keep updating! *hugs*
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October 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I was thrilled when you got another chapter up. And, honestly, if people are going to leave snide, rude and hurtful coments, they should at least have the balls to sign their shit. Cowards. Either way, do't let it get to you (unless you know where they live and have a rabid squirrell handy), then....FRY EM'!!!
*ahem* Other then that, excellent job, keep up the good work, I'm glad Kagome and Inuyasha (kinda) got it together.....will there be a IY/K lemon eventually???
*ahem* Other then that, excellent job, keep up the good work, I'm glad Kagome and Inuyasha (kinda) got it together.....will there be a IY/K lemon eventually???
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October 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
LOL, Tangletown sounds like Lafeyette, Louisiana. Whoever laid out that town must have been drunk, because it makes NO sense at all! I know people who have lived near that town for most of their lives, and they STILL can't navigate it.
And I can't believe that you actually managed to answer something with this chapter that I've been wondering for a while! And it was something totally unrelated to MHH. It wasn't long ago I was talking about movies with someone that we watched as kids, and I remembered one but I couldn't put a name or anything to it. I tried decribing it to them, but they just looked at me like I was nuts.
It was Flight of the Navigator!
^^;;
Anyway, great chapter! I enjoyed it, though it would have been entertaining to see how the rest of Inuyasha's 'visit' with Jakotsu and Bankotsu went. I'm in one of my really, really, REALLY rare 'Yay! Violence!' moods, LOL...
But the ear rubbing and lime was great! *goofy grin*
And I can't believe that you actually managed to answer something with this chapter that I've been wondering for a while! And it was something totally unrelated to MHH. It wasn't long ago I was talking about movies with someone that we watched as kids, and I remembered one but I couldn't put a name or anything to it. I tried decribing it to them, but they just looked at me like I was nuts.
It was Flight of the Navigator!
^^;;
Anyway, great chapter! I enjoyed it, though it would have been entertaining to see how the rest of Inuyasha's 'visit' with Jakotsu and Bankotsu went. I'm in one of my really, really, REALLY rare 'Yay! Violence!' moods, LOL...
But the ear rubbing and lime was great! *goofy grin*
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October 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Er, oops...that last review was from me. I just forgot to put my name in. Talk about scatterbrained! ^^;;
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October 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter. I liked it alot. I think I told you before that the story helps get me through college. Don't let stupid reviewers get you down. If they don't have the balls to post their name then they really aren't worth it. Well update soon, I need something to distract me from midterms and finals.