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November 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Forgot one other thing...I loved that "Wrongfully Cute" line...you should put that logo on a T-shirt as well. Loved it!
'Nuff nagging and niggling. Just dying for more!
'Nuff nagging and niggling. Just dying for more!
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November 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OH WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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November 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
what a twist! i laughed out loud!
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November 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter, I can't wiat for the next one. You know whats weird, age 16 in places in the states. The legal age of consent in Canada is 14..... Can you say Prostitots....Anyway again i love your story i'll be intently waiting for the next installment!
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November 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
very exciting to have an update! hurray! love the story as usual. update sooner please!
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November 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
luv the story so far. it's an interesting view of the blossoming of inuyasha's and kagome's relationship, but so far i've really enjoyed it. i can't wait for the next chapter. i hope it comes soon. i'm dying to read it!
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November 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I liked this chapter because it showed a growth in Inu and Kag's relationship. Between his confession and their new status, I am feeling the growing emotions between the two. You're doing a great job.
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October 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. I like the flow, and I was surprised by Kagura's sudden disgusth Nah Naraku, though working with/for someone like that is annoying as all hell. I love the intereactions between Kagome and IY, and how their relationship is developing. Sometimes, I think her birthday will never come...sigh. I literally choked during IY's little comment about the pictures, GODS that was FUNNY! And too, too true! Great job and hope we have another chapter soon!
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October 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great i love it plz update soon thanx.
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October 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wifey, kudos. I liked how you shifted to focuss off the remance and back to the Naraku business with the dextrety of Himes shifting from to to jazz. Umezu's going to have something on his hands soon, Kagome hopes at least, with a little hint of rentals going into other pockets... and Chris out of the way is likely going to kick Umezu's bollocks to start thinking in that direction. Of course, because I'm one of the privilaged, I can't wait for 23 for MORE reasons than that-- BUT -- my darling angst queen wifey is presently beating around the bush of dangerous legal situations.
This chapter DID give me the feel of a filler chapter-- but it's anything but that. I like how you hide the little all important details in a 'read me between the lines, if you can' sort of way. The cool manner of the tone- the nice an' easy atmosphere every time you speak of it - Nice Naraku tone, i gotta say- makes one gloss over it all nicely and quietly. All the hints got Possible Naraku Demice you gave till now were in this demeanor, and that really is a yardstick of the excellent story-tellership. You keep your present story completely detached from your future plans without letting the hints drop other than intentionally.
I gotta say, though, that I'm still all-a-gitter for 23. Apart from the strange image I have in my head, of Umezu-san referring to his dick as a yard stick of how much he needs to get laid, or desires Kagome at that particular point in time...whichever point that may be.....
This chapter DID give me the feel of a filler chapter-- but it's anything but that. I like how you hide the little all important details in a 'read me between the lines, if you can' sort of way. The cool manner of the tone- the nice an' easy atmosphere every time you speak of it - Nice Naraku tone, i gotta say- makes one gloss over it all nicely and quietly. All the hints got Possible Naraku Demice you gave till now were in this demeanor, and that really is a yardstick of the excellent story-tellership. You keep your present story completely detached from your future plans without letting the hints drop other than intentionally.
I gotta say, though, that I'm still all-a-gitter for 23. Apart from the strange image I have in my head, of Umezu-san referring to his dick as a yard stick of how much he needs to get laid, or desires Kagome at that particular point in time...whichever point that may be.....