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The evilness of this chapter makes me want to kill puppies.

Hey, Num! As always, loved the chapter... I swear to God I wasn't expecting that sudden twist in the plot o_O And the leg humping was just hilarious... Anyway, I've been thinking about something and I just have to ask. I'm not sure if u mentioned before how many lovers Umezu-san has had in the past, I think you did... but you haven't mentioned about him having any children... could it be that in his "hanyou" condition, he's sterile? Uhm, it's just me wondering about it...
Please update soon...
Huggles,
Maggz

O_______________O;;;;; 16?!?!?!?!!? 16?!?!?!?!! HOLY SHIT!!! O_______________O;;;;; =eye twitches= ALL THAT SEXUAL TENSION!!! 16?!?!?!?! .................WHOOOOOOO-HOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ._____.;;; THAT WAS UNEXPECTED.............ANYWAYS I LOVE THIS FIC!!! PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ UPDATE SOON!!! I'LL BE DYING TILL I READ THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!! Your plot is FUCKING AWESOME!! But I didn't understand the 'Coke Accident'....BUT STILL IT ROCKS ON SO MANY LEVELS!!!!!



GoddessK

*stands up and claps* That twist at the end, oh man, was one of the greats. I wish I have thought of it. My friend and I come up with alot of twist and stuff to throw into stories but, my gosh that was just so perfect and well put. *shakes head* I wish right now I could just shake your hand. I love your story and I wish this could never end. I love all the detail you put into this story how everything is well placed. It flows more smooth than a river and has more twists than my favorite country road. Just keep up the great work, I love it and I wish everyone could read it.
Kai

*amused at Kagome's method of revelation* Had I been in her place, I'd probably have had way too much fun plotting ways to shock him with that information, lol...but now we have to wait for the NEXT chapter to find out the results of his newfound knowledge? Darn it, you're being evil! *makes a face at you* Don't you know being evil and making people wait through a huge cliffhanger is childish? *makes another face*

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Me, also childish? Of course not!

LOL, anyway, I enjoyed a lot of scenes in this chapter, including the humping, but that last one beat all I think. I was looking forward to that part the entire chapter since I knew it was coming. Kind of sad that such a huge plot twist got ruined, though. It would have been much more enjoyable had that person (and the person who posted that review for all to see) ruined it. But I'm sure it still probably shocked a few people! ^^

I can't wait to see how things go in the next chapter, so hurry up and get writing! *cracks whip and glares with as much intimidation as she can muster*

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I know, I'm not all that scary, but I try...

Consensual sex at age 16..wow da story is getting really good..lol..ive been waiting for da update and now i read it and i am so happy..yeah..long and waited for dey finally get to be together..how grand is dat..lol...well keep up da good work and kno dat ur fans are behind u 100%...

This is one of the most evil cliffie's ever!!!!!!!!!! I know something is going to get in the way though, it can't be that easy. Great chap as always. More please!

This was a brilliant chapter! Lots of stuff happening, I love it. I've spent the entire story thinking that placing the age of consent at 18 is really wierd. Its at 15 here (Sweden) and I really can't imagine having had to wait for that long. Met my fiancé when I was 16 and I don't think I could have kept my paws off him for another 2 years, and vice versa (he is 6 years older then I am). I'm glad that part of the story is working out atleast. The sexual tension has been great but it's going to be intresting to see if they can build a solid relationship now that the lust gets an outlet (and the need for secrecy is gone). Into the dungeoun in the next chapter? ;)
Also, poor Jakotsu. It serves him right to loose his job, but still.. he is one of my absolute favourite characters in the series so I hate seeing him down on his luck. Hopefully he will grow up a bit from the experience of loosing his employment though, I think he needs it.
Keep up the good work!
/Zmy

Ah, forgot to say that I hope that Inuyasha and Kagome move forward in Operation: Overthrowing Naraku. I think that it's a very interesting plot that I would love to delve more deeply into. I love the interaction between Naraku and his staff, be they regular workers or accomplices. Also, what's up with Zara? She is behaving rather strangely, isn't she? It's going to be so much fun when we finally get all the facts on the table!
I just don't read this for the romance and droolworthy Inuyasha you know (though I must admit that it's one of the biggest reasons).
This is what happens when you have problems sleeping. You have to review twice. And you probably miss something anyway.

/Zmy

Hot holy damn! That was so good I cried laughing...though I was expecting something ever since Kagome got jittery in the parking lot. You still had me fooled though, through the internet research and stumbling across it, I thought Kagome might have found something that explain BDSM or something. THAT was great! Yahoo! Now I just have to wait for the next chapter. (Sniffles). I do want to say, I like how you are developing Kagura's character, and how you dealt with Mrs. Higurashi. I've known easy-going parents and I always thought she might have a good sense of ironic humor in her. Some people might wonder at how easy she is with IY holding her sleeping daughter in her arms, but I think Mrs. H. might actually see through IY's grumpy exterior and might even be content that her daughter found someone...moving around a lot doesn't give a girl many chances for friends, let alone boyfriends, and I bet Mrs. H knew just how lonely Kagome was in Japan. You did blindside me with Jak's getting fired...I thought his retribution had been paid, and dropped and forgiven. But it's logical he would be fired for his little rule-breaking when it came out. I do have to hand it to you, though, that the Jak/Ban scene was one of the most tender I've seen...though most people wouldn't think that. I can see their support for one another, and you have a deft touch with tenderness that makes me smile. Great job, Numisma, and can't wait for the next. (Feral grin.)