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December 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW HOW EXOTIC AND FUNNY.
OKAY SO MY WORDING IS LAME YEAH YEA YEA
BUT REALLY I LOVE I I LOVE IT I LOVE IT TO THE POWER OF INFINITY
IT IS WAY AWSOME. BUT IS THAT THE END OF THE STORY OR IS THERE MORE
OKAY SO MY WORDING IS LAME YEAH YEA YEA
BUT REALLY I LOVE I I LOVE IT I LOVE IT TO THE POWER OF INFINITY
IT IS WAY AWSOME. BUT IS THAT THE END OF THE STORY OR IS THERE MORE
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December 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have been waiting for this chapter (well, I guess now the next chapter) to finally come, and now it is almost here! But, the best thing about this story so far is that for the past umpteen nearly lemonless chapters, I have been intrigued, excited, and generally interested in the PLOT! It's an absolutely wonderful, well-written and original story, and I am mad at myself for not reviewing earlier. Writers of your caliber deserve more encouragement! Thank you for writing this, and I wait with enormous built-up anticipation for the next chapter.
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December 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WELL YOU TOOK YOUR SWEET TIME BUT ITS SUCH A GOOD STORY. KEEP GOING
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November 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG!
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November 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
omg! that was so great! i can't believe it! all this time. . .i didn't know about that. . .? but i wonder, what Inuyasha will do now!? update soon!!!!
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November 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WooHoo! Sixteen! However, in some states the age of the other party is also considered. Whereas, Kagome may not be jailbait for an 18 year old, she may be for a 21 year old. Even if Kag isn't jailbait, I think she should have a serious talk with her mom before she does anything irreversable. You've already painted her mother as very understanding. BTW, I loved the backrub and implication that there could be some future kinky exploration.
OMG! Humping her leg in public! I would just die if it were me. He deserved a punch smack in the nose for that one! It was so hilarious. I feel so sorry for Jakotsu and hope he finds something that will make him happy. He and Ban are so cute together. Damn that Naraku! He better not be setting our hero and heroine up for a fall. I'd be really pissed!
Great work. Excellent grammar and dialog. Everyone is still in character. Please don't make us wait so long for the next chapter. I promise to review up to the very end.
OMG! Humping her leg in public! I would just die if it were me. He deserved a punch smack in the nose for that one! It was so hilarious. I feel so sorry for Jakotsu and hope he finds something that will make him happy. He and Ban are so cute together. Damn that Naraku! He better not be setting our hero and heroine up for a fall. I'd be really pissed!
Great work. Excellent grammar and dialog. Everyone is still in character. Please don't make us wait so long for the next chapter. I promise to review up to the very end.
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November 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
omg Num I sooooooo loved the last few chaps, boy did I miss alot..lol...but it was sooooo worth it to read I love it, will they get to do it??? and why didnt Inu know??? or one of the other people who originally live in Minn??? Like Sango or Kouga??? great plot twist though I was totally thrown for a loop and omg totally funny and ya left it at a cliffy...sighsssss anyhow cant wait to read more let me know when you get another chap up k??? ty ty ty and again great work, so loving this fic till laters be well safe and good much huggles and smiles your fan and friend Mija...:-)
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November 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG So glad you updated. This story keeps getting better and better. Love the plot twist to death by the way. Please write more soon. Clift hangers are evil.
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November 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
gah i love your writing so much ! ^___^ * squwee* cant wait for the next chapter
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November 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Why'd ya stop there?! *whine* I adore this fic. I really do. It's my current fave.