rate_review Reviews

Interesting chapter. I wonder what Kagome dug up. I'm glad there seems to be some movement in their relationship. Quick question. Do you have an idea how long you're going to make this story? You do a good job of make long eventful chapters. You've developed the story beautifully, but you are up to 25, and I must admit that the story is quite advanced. I'm one of those annoying people that like to know how much time they have left to enjoy a story.

I started reading this fanfic on the recommendation of another fanfic writer that I follow regularly. From the very first chapter this fic drew me in with its compelling character portrayals and realistic situations. The writing is excellent and details are extremely vivid. This has become an obsession for me and I look forward to each new chapter. I love the interaction between the characters especially Inuyasha, Kagome, and Kagome's mom. This fic takes its sweet time and allows the reader to become entwined in the nuances that make it such a good read. I want everything to be right when and if Inuyasha and Kagome do get together. The fact that nothing has happened yet is the real allure of this story. Keep up the excellence......it keeps me coming back for more.

I love it. I will be expecting an update soon. I was wondering could you by any chance consider writting about miroku and inuyashas relationship? as a outside thing or something i was left wondering about that. well continue on your good job.

I love this chapter. Inu having a serious discussion with Kag's mom. Wow! Men are either stupid or extremely intelligent. Trying to figure out if he really loves Kagome. That's a new one. Keep up the good work. Saw the note concerning lemons. This story is captivating enough that a lemon can wait as long as you need it to as far as I'm concerned. I'm intrigued by Inu's trip including Naraku and his spider form and Inu's bite putting himself in Kagome's dreams and soothing her. That's some foreshadowing you're doing there. Verrrrrry interesting indeed!

Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave

Great chapter per-usual. This one really filled in a lot of blank spots I had, and I thank you for that. I've told almost all of my friends about this story in hopes that they would actually take the time to read it, which I hope they have. I want to wish you a Merry Chrismahanaqwanzica, as well as a Happy New Year. Keep up the great work.

-CF-

As always I loooooove this story... and the chapter was the best... thanks for updating. P.S. Don't let people who threaten you get to you.... they don't know any better... Their brain is too small to realize that people who write fan fiction also have another life.

Numisma
MHH is an amazing story! It's one of the best AU fics i've read.It's very welll written and i can wait for the next chapters.

YaY, Ohhh I loved that chapter. AND I LOVED THE LAST CHAPTER WITH THE SPIDERS AND EVERYTHING!!!!! And don't worry, I won't pester you about asking you were lemons will be. And just don't listen to the jackasses that keep asking over and over and over again. Your writing this fic so well, Everyone who is reading this and asking for lemons should know that, whenever they come, they will be the best in the world. ^___^ HAPPY HOLIDAYS AND YAY FOR MOVIE HOUSE HANYOU!!!!!!!!!!

TTFN! Ta Ta For Now!

great chapter...keep going...i'm looking forward to the next update...hopy Inuyasha has the guts to admint his feelings/concerns to Kagome

I love that whole tripping on acid thing. Sooooo glad I've never done it. Too freaky. Poor Kagome. And still, your writing flows. No hitches.

Hanyou Slave aka Snowfall