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January 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for updatting I hope the next one is as great as this one.
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January 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love the story, keep it up! ~_^ I can't wait 'till the next chapter *^_^*
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January 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love the story, keep it up! ~_^ I can't wait 'till the next chapter *^_^*
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January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
!!!!! people are threating you for lemons?! omg people get a freaking life... your story is great and when the time is right im sure you'll do what approprate don't listen to dumbass pervs keep updateing when you can its apprecitated!
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January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Girlfight I love that movie when ever it came on i wanted to record it but couldn't because of my asshole for a mom and i don't know how to set our vcr to record but i finally got it recorded YES!! Michelle Rodriguez is SOO cool i like you loved all her movies even if she had a small part.
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January 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesomeness. I've just spent (or if you ask my parents, wasted) the last two days of my winter break reading this thing.I can see why annoying little bitches would be pestering you for lemoney goodness (because VERY efw people can pull it off, and you're probably one of the few who can write good lemon) Honestly, I'd be perstering too if it weren't for the fact that I'd prefer to not have curses hurled at me by every non-heckling reader and you as well.
keep up the good work, can't wait till the next chapter comes out ^^!
keep up the good work, can't wait till the next chapter comes out ^^!
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January 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omfg!! Wow!! Great chappie (as always!) Congrats on your story! I'm not really gonna ask for lemons now, I'm like WAAAAY more interested in what's gonna happen between Kag and Inu! They're like so cute!
Cheers to your story and happy new year 2005!!
Sexy_Blonde_Kagome
Cheers to your story and happy new year 2005!!
Sexy_Blonde_Kagome
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December 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great chapter! can't wait till the next! HAPPY NEW YEAR!
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December 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi!
I've really been enjoying your story and don't care what other people think, I like that the lemon hasn't happened yet. It adds realism, something lacking in a lot of fics, and I really appriciate it. As a Creative Writing major I've learned the importance of reliability in the narration of a story and having two people jump in bed with eachother at the first opportunity isn't realistic therefore not reliable. So no matter what others say, according to the rules of "good writing," that I've spent the few years learning, you are doing the right thing, especially if it's what the story wants.
Also, I really love that you use the setting of the story to further the plot. I get a good sense of what the cities are like, or the gangs little corner of the city, without exsessive description. Setting, for me at least, has always been a sense of feeling rather than a look of the place.
Keep writing!
I've really been enjoying your story and don't care what other people think, I like that the lemon hasn't happened yet. It adds realism, something lacking in a lot of fics, and I really appriciate it. As a Creative Writing major I've learned the importance of reliability in the narration of a story and having two people jump in bed with eachother at the first opportunity isn't realistic therefore not reliable. So no matter what others say, according to the rules of "good writing," that I've spent the few years learning, you are doing the right thing, especially if it's what the story wants.
Also, I really love that you use the setting of the story to further the plot. I get a good sense of what the cities are like, or the gangs little corner of the city, without exsessive description. Setting, for me at least, has always been a sense of feeling rather than a look of the place.
Keep writing!
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December 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. You do an excelent job of explaining the mental struggles of the chracters in MHH. I was so wrapped up in the scene with Kagome and her mother I started crying. I compliment you on staying with the plot foir he story and not putting in lemons until they are supposed to happen. Please update soon.