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Did Kags ever confront Naraku about her raise.

That was rather surprising about Kag's mom knowing a youkai.

Finally the sexual tension was killing me. At first I thought he took her to the park cause he didn't want her in his home. I was a little surprised he did all that bondage stuff with her for her first time, but I guess he had to show her what sex with him was going to be like. Not that she minds since meetig him has opened her up to a new appreciation towards pleasure and pain.

Great chapter, keep up the good work.

Oh I had a thought, is Schultz a spy or something? I can't think of any other reason why he'd stay and be abused.

Damn! That was H-O-T!!! And long o_O An excellent way to entertain myself during my extreme long waiting for the doctor this morning *Whoa!*

This chapter was excellent (as always) but one thing has kept naggin' on my mind. What exactly did you mean by this?:

"“Hate these things, but whatcha gonna do, right?” he drawled as he tossed it lightly to the side. And as long as he used them religiously, she’d never find out. There were some things other people were not meant to know."

Find out about what? o_O Can't wait for the rest to know exactly what that means...

Huggles,

Maggz

Hurray! They finally did it. I do hope you go into more detail about what was happening at Inuyasha's house. That chapter was great. Update again soon please!

YOU UPDATED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! hurray!! i throw lilies and garlands of roses at your feet for this oh-so-naughty-and-delicious chapter!! it was great and SO worth the wait! damn that concrete scene was hot, even if i do thingk inu's an asswipe for not letting kag lose her virginity on a bed. it really wasn't that much to ask. not like she really complained though. i loved it, sheer perfection with a delicate balance between the emotions and the raunchy. you kick ass.

yea!!puppy boy finally figured it out! great chapter. so whats up with the condoms? what does he not want her to know? so kagome's mom knows about youkai's well at least inuyasha is accepted by all involved. there are other youkai's will inuyasha meet anymore or find what happened to his brother? poor miroku, well i guess now he can start living thru inu's sex life after all since he got a small taste as it were. so when will kagome find out about his monthly time? is naraku's end closer now? thanks for the update, great story!

FINALLY!
Man I have been waiting for that for sooooooooo long.
I was feeling sexually deprived over here.
Really.
It's such a shame that I have been reading your story and waiting for this one moment.
But what can I say, I am a hentai!
Let me just say that GOOD THINGS DO COME TO THOSE WHO WAIT.
Can't wait for the next chap, even if it doesn't involve sex.

Shadiyaray

i've been waiting for the update for so long....and i'm am not disappointed, the wait was definitely worth it....great chapter

Death does not wear a miniskirt? Oh, thats right. She always wears the long black pants, black tank top and ankh. (deep bow to Neil Gaimen)

Cute chapter. It is nice to see InuYasha acting like a (gasp) human and examining his emotions.

I was so excited when I saw that you had updated. The nightmares, poor Inu. Inu coming out to Kag's mom was a surprise. I loved the whole startling pouting puppy scene. When Kag's mom was getting out the photo album, I was thinking "Oh, shit. It's Sess and we are going to go into a whole new plot line that will delay our two main characters getting together. " Whew! That was close. I was surprised that it was Shippou. Hey! Sess should come in and hook up with one of the other male characters. We know Miroku is bi. Mmmm. Maybe even kinkier, Jakotsu and Bankotsu. I'm such a hentai. Bunny trails.

I thought Kagome had visions of her riding Inu's back when he bit her while she was having a nightmare. I was hoping that was a foreshadowing of some plot twist in the future. It surprised me that there were no flashbacks when she was riding Inu's back in this chapter.

I'm not in to spanking, but you do great lemons. I loved him having her tied up and shoved against the wall. You were so very descriptive. Yummy. I do like bondage, at least to some degree. The last scene with Miroku interrupting them was too funny. I look forward to more chapters and more lemons! Hey, we waited long enough to deserve it!

Wonder what's got Naraku's panties in a wad?

Normally, your chapters really flow. I noticed that this one seemed a bit choppy. Perhaps you've been busy, tired, or sick. Regardless, it truly was a great chapter. You had me on pins and needles quite a bit. When a reader talks about the story as if he/she were in it, it is a sign that you have done an excellent job as an author. You have pulled the reader into the story. So don't take my review as some form of insanity. It is meant to be a compliment.