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for Bitter Blood

by theMaven

person Akika
schedule January 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AHHHH! dont stop updateing! Im Curious!!!!!! Its really good so far. but then again everything you write is far beyond awsome! i even enjoy the stories you write that really dont sound like my kind thing, and i dont just enjoy them i LOVE them. Your so talented! Everything you write is so moveing! I mean even after they're over i cant stop thinking about them. Like i just read your one-shot "want". I was up all night thinking about that. I mean at the end i was just dumbstruck. It was so good i didnt know how the hell to feel at the end of it all I could think was "wtf". I was happy they got together, sad that they died, even sadder that it had to end. AHH! Your writeing is just to awsome! UPDATE DAMMIT!!! *cries*
person SessRin2003
schedule January 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please make this story better for Sesshomaru to love Rin again. I feel that every time I read it, it makes may heart ache with pain to see how Rin is to suffer for something that she herself could not help. I personally dont know how much more I can take to read this story with such a great sadness in it. I have to admit that I am a big fan of the pair but the sadness I can take.

SessRin2003
person psyco_chick
schedule January 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
How could Sesshomaru be so mean!!?? Poor Rin.. just when she finally through that he really cared for her...
*tear*
I really like Jakken in this piece. It's so obvious sometimes that he really doess like Rin. And this story takes that a little further.
person me
schedule January 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sessy wont sleep \w her 'cause cant have any more kids right? if so why doesnt he tell her and i think kagome she just go to the future and bring back condoms and birth control. No wait i know rin is gonna get her tubes tied by the nurse maid and the end will be happy
person MidsummerDreamer (not loggen on)
schedule January 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good lord, that was tense! You HAVE to update this soon; if you don't, the image of Sesshomaru slapping Rin will prey on my mind until you do. Good work!
person Lulu
schedule January 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is very good ..... but it makes me sad!!!!!I want sesshy to be happy!!! sorry.... Please make sesshy happy!?!?!?
person IzumiCagalli
schedule January 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You Are evil but in a good way. I love all of your stories and Bitter Blood is one off my favorites! Please don't hold the story hostage for to long please!! You have a beautiful gift for writng and all of your stories leave me wanting o read more!! By the way will you be updating A House Divided any time soon? Just curious!!!! Any way great job and pease update soon!!
person Honey Bee33
schedule April 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! It was wonderful! All of the characters STAYED in character, except for Sesshoumaru, though his character development was very realistic! It was awesome, and had me hooked until the end! Kudos to you! Oh, and my favorite part: "I'm seven years old. Wanna make somethin' out of it?" I have never laughed so hard.
Also, I wanted to mention; I think you wrote Rin especially well. They way her mind wanders, and she had so many endless questions, it was definitely a realistic adult Rin. I look forward to more stories from you, and am off to reare rre right now! Ja ne! ---Honey Bee
person Stefanie
schedule April 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow...that was a wonderful story. I read the first story...and now this one. Talk about a wonderful sequel. I trufeelfeel satified after reading both stories.
person faychan
schedule April 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful ending! Daddy silly... That said it all right there. I loved both of your stories, I'll have to read your other one when I get the chance.