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You Know Jaqua has a point, how come Sesshy didn't use his powerful sense of knowing when she's fertile? He just want to be the DOG that he is. A serious BAKA!

Sorry The above comment was me. Got to fast with my comment. See, my emotions! Sorry Maven

Things have gotten really good. I like this side you are showing of Rin. I like how you have portraited her strength but also a side that I never thought Rin of having which is a cruel side. You are doing a great job and your writing just gets better and better. Please update soon.

....Soo, Sesshoumaru acts like a bastard therefore it must be his mother's fault. Riight.

Awwwwww! Daichi reminds me of my goddaughter... well... hehe.. with the exception of the clawns and fangs, of course. :) And Rin is just.... creepy :) This is such a good story.. well, heck, I like ALL your stories, if memory serves :) Please update again soon. :)

Oh, Suki, Suki Now! You Go Rin. I was wondering when those papers would be put into action. But I hope my girl don't get too power struck. As for lord Sesshy, well....let's just say he is still a bit much for me. You know I must say I am a bit pissed off wiht Kagome for not informing Rin of her condition. Men are idiots when it comes to women welfare. Kagome is a modern day woman and know very well Rin's body is hers, she should have told Rin of her condition. Even though Sesshy claims he was concerned with her health, his way was too much. I had a gut turning night of sleep from the last chapter, that's how this story stirred my emotions. Good Show Maven! Keep me Boiling! Love It!

Oh Shit! (excuse my foul thought) Damn! It just doesn't stop with this man! Rin is good, cause damn if it were me....Shit! (excuse me again) How the hell is going to work? I guess I have to wait and find out next time! Good writing honey, my emotions are boiling! Peace!

Ohhhh poor Rin!
Sesshomaru's starting to sound like BakaYasha - saying and doing all the wrong things for the wrong reasons!

WOW, im usually not a fan of dark stories or what have you, but im reallllllllyy liking this one!

but i have a question,
How come he can't do "the naughty" with her?
i mean she's not fertile all the time, and being a demon, he should be able to tell when she is and when she isn't fertile, so that way she wouldn't get pregnant...

-but if thats not how your story's gunna go, then hey, im all for it! its your story, and everything you write always kicks ass!

so keep up the good work!!

-but go easy on rin

ok, ok im going!!

poor rin, sesshomaru is being a jackass