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January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to say bitter blood and the first one were two of the best i have read on this sight. Amazing. You may have put Sesshoumaru out of character but...it was the cutest thing to see the cold lord like that. I'll tell you this much, it brought up tears reading this fic. Thanks for writing it. Truely a work of art.
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January 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG - Inuyasha's kids and Sesshy's are SO cute together... absolute adorable - you should write a follow-up fic, with the two families involved =)
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January 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
BRAVO MAVEN! BRAVO! I was not disappointed, very much elated. I loved your story "The Girl" and how you used the POV or each character. As for this story, I loved the way you had my emotins in turmoil! Just Love It! As for this story, I liked the way you changed his character. I guess a demon can be thankful, and not fully knowing how to handle himself when his son said he loved him. That was just beautiful. I am reading " In a Different Light" now and I know I won't be disappointed. Thanks Maven, Thanks. Peace
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January 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aside from using every fanon cliche I can recall--Sesshoumaru's mother was evil, Sesshoumaru's father, despite the fact he was a warlord, was tenderhearted, mating marks, Rin!Sue is now immortal, Sesshoumaru forgetting his human and hanyou hate to gleefully reproduce with Rin!Sue, Kagome delievering babies, *beats head on keyboard* and ect it's not a bad fiction. Certainly better than some of the other crap out there.
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January 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was A beautiful story and I loved the way in how it ended. You have a wonderful talent for writing and I can't wait til your next story! I am a fan and as always great job!!
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January 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
will there be any more to this story if so please email me when it is finished
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January 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good stuff, keep up the excellent work! :)
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January 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
only one more chapter??? O_O Eeeeep!!
Please update soon. I can hardly wait.
Please update soon. I can hardly wait.
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January 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I love Rin in this chapter! I'm not happy with Sesshomaru though. (that lying player :P) I thought Dokumi was almost too nice, nearly Mary Sue-ish. Well, most of the times, happiness and compliance in 'forced' help is a facade, is it not?
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January 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PPPPLLLLLLLEEEEEEAAAAAASSSSSEEEEE make this longer . . . i really wanna know what happens, love it so far.