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This is one of the best Sess/Rin stories I have read; your character & plot development were WONDERFUL!!

that was amazing i absolutely loved it i think i may have not gotten any sleep till i finished both storys u r a wonderful writter i have read most ur storys but this takes thecake keep up

This was a wonderful sequel. I absolutely loved everything about it.
I love how you portray Rin. I find that too many times, in fanfiction, Rin is made out to be a possession. Your balance with her is perfect. For example, in the seduction chapter, you have Rin being subservient and throwing herself at Sesshoumaru's feet, but your Rin is *not* weak. She is strong. And she isn't being completely subservient; she is simply a woman who is not ashamed of her desires, and even proclaims that Sesshoumaru's body is hers, and I just found that so excellent. I mean, I love Rin/Sesshoumaru and even though I'm rather feminist, I know how hard it is to pull off Rin/Sesshoumaru's relationship as beyond mere possession, and you just tag it without being overly out of character.
I don't think you made Rin completely mary-sue either. She did lose herself at some point with the whole Dokumi thing, and she admitted the desire to hurt--she's very human. Anyway. Great, excellent job.

An absolutely beautiful read. I hadn't read any of these kinds of stories before but I LOVE Inuyasha. Such a good story with real characters. Continue to write and grow. I'll be waiting for more.

That has to be the one of the best stories that this website contains. Wonderful Job.

If there is one thing I have to say about your fic, besides the great storyline and plot, is that is completely incorrect. Please don't take this as a flame, it is not meant to be one. But I feel that I have to explain why your fic is horribly wrong. First of all, Rin and Jaken call Sesshoumaru: Sesshoumaru-sama not my lord. Secondly, Sesshoumaru's mother was a dog demon, one of the last. Third, Inutaisho never had mistresses and had only ever loved Izayoi, only bearing a child with Sesshoumaru's mother for heir purposes. Fourth, even he did have mistresses (which he didn't), he would never allow them to bear his child, since Sesshoumaru's a full inu youkai, his mother had to have been an inu youkai as well. Fifth, Rin WOULD have bat an eyelash, in fact she would have cried. She is NOT a Mary-Sue, she is just an innocent child in the anime and manga, and only cares about "Sesshoumaru-sama". Sixth, Sesshoumaru still wouldn't have smiled if Rin was his mate. Sure, he can tell her he loves her, but it wouldn't go beyond that. Seventh, even though Rin is now Sesshoumaru's mate and Lady of the Western Lands, she wouldn't act the way you portraid her. Nor would she go crazy with power like you made her when Dokumi came by after Sesshoumaru told her about the affair. Eighth, I doubt the other Lords would attack Sesshoumaru because he mated with Rin. Inutaisho mated with Izayoi and no one tried to kill him. (His death had nothing to do with other taiyoukai. Besides, he could've taken all of them anyway.) Ninth, Inutaisho is not a Lolicon pedophile. He would've never taken a girl younger than his son as a mistress (if he had any) and he would've never let her conceive let alone use her in those purposes. I hope you read this, you might just skip it, thinking it's a flame. But it isn't. I'm not dissing your work, in fact, I'm extremely happy that someone else thinks that Sesshoumaru and Rin go together. Better than Kagura and him (by the way, it is entirely impossible for him to love her, unless he makes love to the air because she dies and he can't save her) or *shudder* Kagome and him (HELLO! They HATE each other!). I just want you to know, if you plan on writing another Rin/Sess fic, please use them correctly and use correct information (it is Aun, not Ah-Un) so that the readers don't have to dislike your work. But it really turns me off when you write about a child having sex with Inutaisho. That is just sick. So, please keep that away from your work. Other than the nine things I mentioned above, you have wonderful writing skills and flawless grammar. Many fics I have read turn out to have such horrible grammar that I can't understand what they wrote or horrible Japanese ("Ohio" instead of "Ohayou") If you don't know Japanese, don't write it. Your fic made me want to read your others, knowing that they are Sess/Rin fics. I'm sure I will enjoy them more than this fic. Keep up with this wonderful pairing!

Kudos... I love all your story....but my fav has to be this one. I just love Rin even though I think she should left Sesshomaru. This story my fav. out all the Sess/Rin pairing, it has everthing: drama, comedy, adultery,action, and best of all a happy ending.

I loved this story. It's my favorite Sess/Rin pairing to date. I'm looking forward to reading more of your work.

ok i just finished reading this. WTF!? how can you let Rin stay with sess after he cheated on her? Let him stew. Rin had no self-respect for herself in this story.

soo beautiful, so erotic, yet soo sad... (i am referring both to the first, and second parts of this series) *glomps the author* publish this please!
(yes i am a guy, but is this so wrong?)