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by EvilNekoEatsYourSoul

person swasdiva
schedule August 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow...that threw me clear across the country. Some powerful writing, there, and a poignant plot. I appreciate how you ended it unresolved, because it gives a greater emphasis to Rin's pain, and frankly, it's more realistic. Your imagery was subtle in some places, raging in others, but always churning with an angsty undercurrent. All in all, it was freaking fabulous. Great stuff!
person Wow
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That...was...beautiful. I can't believe you didn't get more reviews. Absolutely fantastic! I wish you would write some more!
person Rhi-chan
schedule August 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMFG! you should not have made that a one shot.you should really continue it.It was soo great and i do love cit.It was written very very well!! And I didnt enjoy it dearly!!
person Feminafures
schedule April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Damn this fic just made my night. So sad and painful, yet beautiful at the same time. You have such a way with words, please continue.

Gia
person crazy4ademon
schedule April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow this fic is deap. You shoudl rite a sequal explaining what happened to her after she left. Who she met. Did she find another love? PLease write a sequal!

blessed be
~Kaira
person No One Knows
schedule April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Amazing...