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for Detention

by Atropa

person murlock
schedule May 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh My God! I wish Kagura was my teacher, I'd give her more than a little licking session. Please add another chapter.
person theMaven
schedule April 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That WAS naughty . . . hehe ^_^

I think you meant "perspiration" instead of "transpiration."
person Anon
schedule April 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hahaha that was naughty.... i don't know what to say...more!!!
person Utens the Black Rose
schedule April 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was very naughty! *smirks* I like it!
person ThatsMsDiva2U
schedule April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was a fantastic one-shot story. You should make a sequel.
person No One Knows
schedule April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*bows before queen of alternative pairings*
person MOFAF
schedule April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
now why do I get the feeling that any/all of Shippo's male classmates would have killed to do that detention for him....think he had more fun than expected (maybe Kagura did too...who knows, she might just keep her eye on Shippo until he's old enough)
person Nina
schedule April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was very naughty, but good. You are absolutely queen of the odd pairings. Way to go.
person darkcupid
schedule April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
one word CONTINUE. this was really good please try to make a sequel
person nightmareofcat
schedule April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
omg that way funny and very naughty! i loved it.