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I enjoyed the fic very much but am affended (spell?) by the last chapter and the mentioning of the christians crucifing the human that allied with the demons, for I am a christian and feel i must protest to this. You have made the real life elements in your fic aline with the history of the events. I am okay that you put the crusades in the fic but if anything you should have said that they were blinded by promise from the pope that will never come (like they will not spend time in pergitory, geting land and money). And that the pope did the crusades in order benfit his own pocket. I realy don't expect you to change the fic but please put something on the AN so people won't think that christian did that to japan.
- Ame-chan

love ya story.. but it seems there's some missing part in chapter 16 .. it was not the continuous story from part 15 .. can ya pls check.. tanks!!!

hi, wanna inform ya about there's some missing parts in ya later chapters of ur story .. i think ya miss out the part where sesshomaru fights with kimi they all and how rin managed to escape from yori... pls check, but realli enjoyed ya story though!

At last I have found this wonderful story and I have been able to finish it. I'm going to read it's squeual next.

Ja ne!

Tainted InuShemeeko

I was reading this on fanfiction.net then it disappeared before I got to the last chapter. It was simply a wonderful ending! I can't wait to read the sequel!

~AntarsStarChild

Wonderful story!!! I found you under Fairia13's recommended fics, and I find I really like Sess/Rin pairings (especially ones that are COMPLETE before I start reading them...Heh) so I decided to start reading this one. And I just spent my WHOLE day totally engrossed. I love your style, and I love your interpretation of Sess's personality, as well as an adult Rin having been practically raised by him. Awesome job and I look forward to now reading all the rest of your work. Thanks so much for sharing!!!

I absolutely loved your fanfic! I am really glad that I discovered it on a weekend because it was impossible to pull myself away from this intriguing story until I read it all. I enjoyed it abundantly and I am looking forward to reading the sequel to this story. You did an awesome job and keep up the great work! And you NEVER have to apologize for too long of a chapter! I just grab at anything that I can get in good stories; I can't tell you how satisfying it was to read a good long chapter and know that I can enjoy so much MORE of the story with chapters as long as that one coming up. You did an awesome job, I'm definitely going to be looking at your other fics and I hope that you continue writing as you are very gifted! Once again I loved it thanthank you for your time and effort and for posting this for others, like me, to enjoy.

*Ralina*

Great story, I loved it! Just wanted to tell you that and to also say that "butterfly" in Japanese is "Cho" or even "Cho cho" (although I think that's probably the child's way of saying it). It just had me confused for a moment since you did a great job of everything else when you used "batafurai". But anyways... I can hardly wait to read the sequel!

Okay..I'm feeling an 'Aww' moment, but when Sesshoumaru grabbed her with his two arms for the first time, I just couldn't help myself. *sniff* It was sooo beau-ti-ful!!!

But I know the feeling about the Crusaders they WERE a nasty bunch.

Can't wait for the next installment, but I gotta....shoot.


8/31/04

Wow...A truely great story! ^_^ I enjoyed reading every chapter of it! I especially loved it when Master Sumida gave Rin the Kama Sutra! I about laughed my ass off! I was laughing so hard I was crying. Reason being is that when she handed Rin that scroll I just has this FEELING that it was the Kama Sutra. I laughed even harder when my guess was right on the mark ^_^. Its very rare to find a fic with the depth this had in it. The research that must have gone into this must have been exstensive.! But I am curious...where did you get information about the mating mark, or was that made up? I can't tell either way. It was THAT believable, not to mention detailed enough that is sounded like it came out of a book. Anyhoo 5 stars for this great story. There wasn't one part of this story that I didn't enjoy at all. Anyhoo, I'm going to read your other stuff. If its anything like this, they are bound to be just as good! Until next time! ^_^