rate_review Reviews

I love this story.
I think I already said that.
but I say it again!

great.
hope you won't run out of ideas...

migi-chan

grrrrrr I know, I know, you're working up to something special but damn it!!! ::sighs:: it had better be blisteringly hot and cause them both to black out.

It's so, good Maven. Please finish!

oh yea, good times. rin is such a lucky girl. IN A CAVE WITH SESSHOMARU PLAYING GAMES!!!! dear Lord *fans self* i am so jealous right now its ridiculous. keep up the fantastic work!!! update soon! come on sess/rin lovin'!!!!!!!!!!!

Great chapter. I just love the teasing that Sesshoumaru displace. OOC, but get to see and read.
Will Rin get her revenge. I hope so and I hope that she gets him off guard as well as good. Update soon.

Your story is addicting. Its always great to see you've updated a chapter. I always check every day to see if you have. I at least feel less perverted now that I know it was purposeful for Sess's comments to be seen that way :o

Gosh I wish I had my own Sess, one armed or not, he scores a three-way tie with Hiei and Kurama to me.

You Rock.

I have be fan fan of your work for awhile now. I started this story on ff.net. I love the way you write. You are one of the reasons I started my first fanfiction. Not as good as you but I'm trying.

KNB

Excellent story, just like your other ones. You made Rin a bit tougher, which is working out very well.

Gia

You know I love your stories. ^_^ I liked the beginning of the chapter a lot, it was rather amusing, the end felt, a little, I suppose, repetitive. It was well written, and I liked the effect you used of phrases (purposefully) scattered into it to give it a very, for lack of a better example, clip show feeling. I could just see the fight happening then a second flashback, or the voices coming in with a faded layering of the previous scene. It just felt a tad repetitive since a lot of it was what you had gone through before. Still, beautiful work, as always. I am curious to see how the other Lords will take Sesshoumaru's announcement.

Wow, you're a reallyyyyy good writer. Update soon please =]