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for In a Different Light

by theMaven

person Stefanie
schedule April 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Im speachless. Yeah im gonna leave it at that (giggles).Update again soon plz ^.~ I dont know how long I can wait for the next chapter!
person Mischief
schedule April 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excellent! I love this story sooo much. Please update soon!
person stella
schedule April 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
whoo, it got a tad steamy, but i also loved the interaction w/rin and sesshomaru dealing w/her insecurites, great chapter and can't wait for me
person Sessy-sama
schedule April 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
As usual, well written and strong. Rin's outburst of uncertainty really pulls the reader for a loop since she doesn't show such ferocity to rejecting the courtship until then. Though the way you did it was very logical, seemings she unconsciously tells the version of the dream that would show Sesshoumaru and herself the doubt she felt but was too intimidated and too excited to speak about. I very much like the way you portrayed Sesshoumaru concerning that. Many would make is ever so mushy...Sesshoumaru is not mushy. His admission that he loves Rin was the best because of course once he says it, that is it, it is done and known and permanent. Very well, patiently waiting for the next chapter.
Sessy-sama
person shaid
schedule April 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
::sighs:: wow... fun fun fun. While reading this, I kept thinking of something my creative writing professor said after reading my unfinished fan fic. "Everyone loves alien sex." Now, I'm not sure if he was unaware that Sessh was a demon and not an alien, but I belieive he may have meant that sexual situations with non human partners are something that facinates us all.

That said, MORE!!!!! we want more, maven. PLEASE!!!!!
person animegirl007
schedule April 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story was good, and now it's even better...I love their courtship...I was getting mad with Rin a little bit, thinking that she wasn't worthy of Sessy love. But, the way you had Sesshoumaru explain he feeling to her ...was perfect....Now, I know you would tell...but, I have been thinking of our old friend the village headman( I can't think of his name now.) will he be making the appearance again to ruin Sess and Rin love affair or what???......I love them and I want them to be happy, but I got a feeling that you are planning something for them...I know Sesshoumaru can handle anything ...but their lives seem just a little to perfect right now..UPDATE SOON PLEASE.
person Jaxomruth
schedule April 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really love your stories. You write some the very best Rin/Sess stories I have read. They deal with the real lemslems such a match would create, both on a social level and an emotional one. To often writers gloss over the problems and confusion that such a romance would create. These problems must be dealt with not shoved the in back corner. I realize that a great deal of the character detail must come from your own mind since the manga and anime gives us so little insight on Rin and Sess. Yet despite this you have manage to matain as true to the original character as possible. Your lemon scenes are tasteful done and blend with stories unlike so many writers wust ust fill their stories with sex rather substance. Good job and I can't wait to read the next chapters.
person Night Child
schedule April 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hehehe! I find this -hilarious-! Don't ask, because I truly do not know why I do! I REALLY encourage you to keep writing this fic! It is SO great~
person Tori
schedule April 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was nice. I don't usually like Sess/Rin fics because it's hard to write a love scene without Sess being totally OOC, but your doing a wonderful job and I can't wait to see an update!
person Crystal
schedule April 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great! I luv everything about it. You seem to take your time with the writtin instead of rushing through and i luv that too!!!!!!!!!!!!! Keep goin=)
E.B.S. yea notice those three words sounded kinda fishy