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for In a Different Light

by theMaven

person a reader
schedule May 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story. I love it. Keep up the good work and keep on updating.
person libbs
schedule May 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ohhhh no. don't tell me that's the end girlfriend. if it is, you are soooooooooooooooooooooooooooo dead. DO U HEAR ME! DEAD!!!! that can't be the end, wheres the promised lemony goodness? wheres hap happy ending? u can't just end this wonderful storie on such a sour note. if u do, ur pure eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeebiiiiilll do u hear, eeeeeeeebiiiilll! i want more more MORE DAMMIT! MORE! and i always get what i want isn't that right Sesshy?esshesshy nods head:: so finish it OR ELSE!!!
person Stefanie
schedule May 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!WHERE IS FLUFFY!! (sobs)
person friendlyreader
schedule May 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OH HOLY FUCK

that was AMAZING! omg what's going to happen now?!?!?!?!?!?!?! ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

*silence* there are no words for the genius i've just read. i am amazed. i wanted those hunters and that tenajnaohera to dto die soooooooooo badly that i almost passed out when i read their deaths. im like HOT DAMN, YOU GOT SERVED! oh man, now what's going to happen to sesshomaru?! where's rin going? when are they going to make babies?!?!?!?!?!

im ok, im just completely excited for the next chapter. i cant wait so update soon!!! keep up the FABULOUS WORK!
person animegirl007
schedule May 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This chapter "Control" was great ... It had everything in......I was happy was hell, when the headman die....If only shows that you don't fuck with Sesshomaru...I felt so sorry for Rin having to kill, but it had to be done...Now, where's Sesshomaru?...I know he's hurt...but, as long as he's not dead.....I know it will work itself out....UPDATE SOON .......
person Mischief
schedule May 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another awesome chapter! Please update soon!!
person Shaid
schedule May 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sasshomaru is NOT dead. CANNOT be!! You woulnd't to mao make Shaid cry, would you??? :-(
person Sessy-sama
schedule May 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story, as always. Gomen, for not reviewing as of late. Writer block affects not only my story, but good reviews for others. Still slightly there so prolly won't be the best of reviews. I like how you have Rin in this chapter, definitely stronger than when it first started, not physically, but emotionally and mentally. When the stroy started she was rather hesitant about a lot of things, but here she just went for it and did what needed to be done. I like it, but poor Rin, she is alone. Bad Sessy, leaving her, though he was prolly so hurt he needed a safe place to 'lick his wounds' so to speak, even if he wanted to be with Rin. But since you already said you are a sucker for happy endings I'm not too worried. It will all work out in the end.
person samuria
schedule May 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely adore your fic and I ask you to please hury and post anouther chapter. I only have one coment and that is that Ren better be running back to fluffy because the most romantic of romance seans happen when the lady dresses her lords wound. Plus it is not every day that osteasteamed Lord is wounded so I sugest that you take advantage of the situation.
person Tori
schedule May 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Glad we're so high on your list! Getting an update on this story makes my day and this chapter was no exception. The headman's involvment was predictable enough, but vomivomit thing was a bit surprising...and gross. So I'm guessing the demon Sesshomaru was going to confront after smelling the cloth is the Northern Lord? Agh, sorry about that...I know I hate it when people try and pick apart at my story lines. These events are playing out very interestingly though. It's kind of hypocritical of these people to have demon relationships and then hunt others who have them isn't it? Anyway, good chapter and as always I can't wait to see more!