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by Kyattochan

person Veil of Illusions
schedule August 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad you're back and posting again. From a fellow horse back rider my deepest sympathies for the jump accident at the show. Just reading it made me cringe. Have fun at your confrence. I loved the chapter. Can't wait to see more.
person snowfall
schedule August 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aaawwww! We didn't see how Inu and Kag saved each other in the garden! Could you add that to the beginning of this last chapter? I hate being a pain in the ass, but I know you would do something really cool with it. I love this last chapter. Rock, paper, scizzors, and panties on the altar. And, Sess's comment that Kohaku wants to die. You are just too awesome. I can't wait for your next post. Thanks.
person jen
schedule August 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Umm...I'm not sure, but I think you're missing a chapter. 33 is titled Demon Tamer, but it's an author note. And 33 and 35 don't fit together, like there's something left out. Good story
person sutashii
schedule August 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ummm I was just wondering why One chapter Kagomes' screaming for help and Inu is pinned to a tree... and two authors notes later... There in a great hall and with Sessh, Miroku,, an, and Sango no less... WHAT HAPPENED!!! *whines* I love this!! I dont want to miss a chapter!!! please fix it Im in suspense!!!
person Moon Dog
schedule August 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad to see that your back. I hope your doing okay, you seem to be very accident prone.
person Xenia
schedule July 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I fell behind in my fanfic readinain.ain... and actually didn't miss too much here! *L* So at the risk of sounding like a total weirdo, I'm kinda happy you didn't update too much while I was gone, or else I would've felt like a huge jerk not reading/reviewing for so long! :) Can't wait for the next chapter... but won't nag you either ('cos I know you're going as fast as you can!) Hope your PC situation works out alright...! <3

Oh! And I'm interested in reading those ideas for the other story... but I think I said that already last time I reviewed? I think so... My memory's not always the best ;) Well, whenever you post 'em up, there's interest! :D
person aku_neko
schedule July 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
dang. I was browsing the Inuyasha fics, when i stumbled acrosst this one. At first i had my doubts about reading it, however after these past two chapters, i'm hooked. The bit about Hojo was great; so true! I'm trying to imagine sweet lil' Rin with sex toys. FUNNY!
anywhos, this story is really, really interesting. I want to keep on reading.

uberkudos!!!

=^o^=
person DarkImmortal
schedule July 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful job so far, i can't wait till the Chapters staommiomming again. was "demon tamer" sappsed to end with just the Authors note?
person emily
schedule July 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
what happened?? the story was so amazing and then you just stopped writing...i really hope that you have decided to discontinue the story but if you have can you post a AN??
person snowfall
schedule June 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, I have been so very patient. When do we get to see Inuyasha rescue Kagome? Please update. Okay, I'm on my knees begging. How embarrassing. This is one of my very favorite stories.