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September 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
LOLOLOL! Thank you for the clarification on the white-haired kid, because I was about to leave a review of "huh"? Who was the mother? Eeek! Now I want to know who the kid is and why Sess wants to kill him. Talk about twists! Please abandon the car for the more relaxing commute of a train...and another chapter written...lol. Take care and look forward to the next, as always.
Fate
Fate
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September 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!!! You updated! You're Japanese?!? Wow, your english is better than mine and I'm Canadian.
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September 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I like updates. But I know the real world sometimes gets in the way of the things we REALLY want to do, so you'll post the next chapter when you find the time. I LOVE the unique spin you put on events that happened in the manga and anime. Really original aometometimes completely hilarious.
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September 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have been soooo patient...I think. Seeing Sess's bravery was worth it all. And, to top it off, he has a child!
How the hell did that happen seeing as he killed all the women sent to him? Mmmm. A real mystery.
Your story has gotten kind of twisted. By the time you finish, I should have a website up. I would love to
put your story on it. It is certainly one of my very favorites.
Since you may be driving a lot, you might want to invest in one of those small handheld tape recorders
and simply talk your way through a chapter and then type it when you get the chance. Just an idea. Of
course, I'm just being selfish. After all, I am one of your biggest fans!
Lurve,
Snowfall, aka, Hanyou Slave
How the hell did that happen seeing as he killed all the women sent to him? Mmmm. A real mystery.
Your story has gotten kind of twisted. By the time you finish, I should have a website up. I would love to
put your story on it. It is certainly one of my very favorites.
Since you may be driving a lot, you might want to invest in one of those small handheld tape recorders
and simply talk your way through a chapter and then type it when you get the chance. Just an idea. Of
course, I'm just being selfish. After all, I am one of your biggest fans!
Lurve,
Snowfall, aka, Hanyou Slave
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August 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay! More story! :D Thank you for updating... and I look forward to the next chapter. :D I loved the part at the end where Kouga pretended he'd known the garden was there all along! <3 *grin*
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August 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
very nice story, the plot is good, use of charactors is excellent and your commitment to completion is impressive. good to know you check your fan mail adn respond as well. ^-^
mwer
mwer
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August 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This fic is frickin awesome! It took me nearly a week to read all of it though. I only had a couple hours every other day. There's just one thing I don't get. How did Inuyasha and Kagome go from full-youkai transformation where "All hell broke loose" as you said, to staring at a ceiling behind, what I can only assume, was the stone guardian doors? Did you skip a chapter in updating, or just forget that's where you were in the plot? Just curious. So anyway. Update soon 'cause it rocks!
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August 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So glad to see an update on a terrific story! Ah, real life gets in the way of good fanfiction, how understandable!
I'm still a bit confused...is there a missing chapter between "Demon Tamer" and "Stalking the Hunter"? I mean, at the end of "Demon Tamer," Inu grabs his sword and presumably transformsk...k...and the next scene involving Inu in "Stalking the Hunter" is him being all normal with everyone while the girls gape at the illusion of a beautiful ceiling.
I was hoping that Inu would get a chance to reaffirm his mating mark on Kags...after all, she did try to remove it and their link. And I'm sure Kags is just dying to comment/tell him off about Kikyo. Even if you did redeem Kikyo before she died, Kags has to wonder at the depth of Inu's feelings for his "ex." And would he really attack/rape Kagome in his full youkai state as Sango suggested? I tend to think that he'd definitely recognize her as his mate and wouldn't hurt her. Maybe a l a little rough love but not to the point of acutally causing her pain or making her bleed. After all, Sango may know a lot bout demons in general but Inu does love Kags....doesn't matter if he's human, hanyou, or full demon...don't think his state would change his feelings of love or desire for her.
I'm still a bit confused...is there a missing chapter between "Demon Tamer" and "Stalking the Hunter"? I mean, at the end of "Demon Tamer," Inu grabs his sword and presumably transformsk...k...and the next scene involving Inu in "Stalking the Hunter" is him being all normal with everyone while the girls gape at the illusion of a beautiful ceiling.
I was hoping that Inu would get a chance to reaffirm his mating mark on Kags...after all, she did try to remove it and their link. And I'm sure Kags is just dying to comment/tell him off about Kikyo. Even if you did redeem Kikyo before she died, Kags has to wonder at the depth of Inu's feelings for his "ex." And would he really attack/rape Kagome in his full youkai state as Sango suggested? I tend to think that he'd definitely recognize her as his mate and wouldn't hurt her. Maybe a l a little rough love but not to the point of acutally causing her pain or making her bleed. After all, Sango may know a lot bout demons in general but Inu does love Kags....doesn't matter if he's human, hanyou, or full demon...don't think his state would change his feelings of love or desire for her.
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August 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story, but I am confused. In the last chapter wasn't Inuyasha Sealed? And now it is like it didn't even happen, and Sesshoumaru had left Kagome and Inuyasha and went ahead and now he is with Them? Like I said just a little confused by this chapter. Overall a great story, though.
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August 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved the chapter but it seems like we are missing something. I know that chapter 32 isn't the one before 35 because if it is then I don't get it. Don't get me wrong I am REALLY happy that you updated finally but I do believe we are missing a chapter or something. Well I am glad that you are able to update again and I can’t wait to see what happens next.