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hi. it's me again (poor you =3) anyway, good story, im sorry to see it end, but at least most everything was resolved. the thing about ending the series, tho? this is actually like the third or forth best-selling series rumiko takahashi has made, and i think it's the only one she's still working on (i dont know, i just think so, but i DO no that urusei yatsura and ranma 1/2, her first two series are finished) anyway, great story, but i think people exaggerated sesshy's high and mighty atitidtude a bit (incidentally, was the killing off kikyo thing a politcal move or are you a kikyo h8er? XP)

anywho, good story, keep up the good work, hope to see you do more of the same, blah blah blah

SIncerely,
Yeldarb1983

this is great update soon

I love how you ended it. I almost wish you didn't. I'll be sure to keep an eye out for any one shots you may do in the future on this story.

Sniffle!!!! BAWLS and blubbers... It's over... It can't be so!!! I so very much enjoyed the story!!!! It was so wonderfully written... I do hope that you will write one shots.. It would be great!! Thank you for your story!!! I hope that you will continue to write more Inu/Kag and Mir/San and Sess/Rin stories.. I like those.. and again a HUGE thank you!!!!

Darn it! I wanted to see if RAID really worked on the hornets. Miroku would be just the right person to use it on them. Would have been cool if it did work. Rin fainting was cute as was Inu's reaction to getting married. It was sweet the way you had Inu holding Kag's at the council's review.

One shots? How about a sequel instead? Since you seem to listen to readers somewhat... *clears throat* I want a sequel with a baby/small child with combined miko and hanyou power, Inu unsuccessfully attempting to clean up his language, Kagura getting her heart back and beating the shit out of Naraku before Inu and Sess together ash the guy, Miroku considering having his hand replaced with a stronger than normal bionic hand, Ooooh, a preggers Rin! You could have so much fun with a worried Sesshoumaru. If Rin thought she had him wrapped around her pinky before...! And, RAID killing hell's hornets!!! Gotta have it.

I know that your real life has been busy. However, I would have rather waited for you to put more into the last chapters than you did. They seemed rushed. You don't usually skip over so much. I love your writing and think you shorted yourself there, um, and us. Please don't throw things at me! You could write the entire sequel before you start posting, that way you will feel like you have time to put in everything you want in the story. That's what I'm doing with my next one. I can take two weeks off from writing and no one complains. At least, consider it.

Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave

Thanks for a very good story. I know it was one of the first stories at AFF and I had some worries that you might not finish it (can you tell I've followed this story from start to finish?) But...we readers really appreciate it when the writers finish their stories. Thank again ;)

I love it!!! I hope you update on Sunday!!

almost over??????? *cries* no!! what about... one shots? you could do a set of one shots b/t the characters on a separate... thing....

great update

Yay, you updated. Another great chapter. Cool, Kag's and Inu's power blending. I wondered if the Kag Naraku had was a puppet. You are so great with the humor between Sess and Rin, with all of them for that matter. I hope he decides to mate her. Miroku, always the hentai. Raid! LOL. Might work. Can't help but try, ne? Hope Naraku gets bit in the ass when he tries to absorb the barrier.

Are you going to go back and fix the formatting on the first chapters?


Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave