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by Kyattochan

person snowfall
schedule April 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aaaah! So many unfinished--ends. Now that you have finished your thesis, I expect more of you.
person theMaven
schedule April 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very nice ^__^ I'm even willing to overlook some of the typos and spelling errors. Because that's just the kind of reviewer I am . . . But, seriously, I like your fic. It's a well-rounded, entertaining piece of fiction. And I've seen the collar-thing done before, but not like this. So, bonus points to you for your stretching your imagination and putting a new and satisfying spin on an old angle.

theMaven :)
person maria
schedule April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a good story. PLEASE don't ruin it by bringing Kikyo inyo it & turning it into a Kikyo/Inu/Kagome triangle!! It has a good Inu & Kag element without it. I also can't wait to see how you bring Rin & Sess together. I hope he gets over his prejudice soon.
person drake220
schedule April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
nice ending...well done. the whole thing with kouga was great. i wasn't expecting kags to orgasm either so both inu adn I were surprised. i liked it
person snowfall
schedule April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ah. I enjoy this so much. Too bad about Sango's father. Love the marking! Want some reeeeeal mating!
person myrrdinowl
schedule April 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is so cool. update again soon , but could you try spacing your story out a little more? makes it easier to read. ;)
person snowfall
schedule April 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story istivativating. I am constantly checking it for updates. Can't wait for the next.
person Numisma
schedule April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
very nice story so far, neato elevator lemon, quite inventive. cannot wait for more of the story.
person snowfall
schedule April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I don't usually care for stories set in modern day, but ths grs great. I've beenghinghing my ass off and almost crying at the same time. Keep it up.
person Sabichan
schedule April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Gomen!! I read this fic last night, but finished at about four in the morning-no way I could have possibly written a comprehensive review. So here I am now. Aren't you glad I waited?
Anywho...
This fic is freaking Awesome!! Back in the day, I was just like everyone else and didn't care much for AU's. But lots of great ones have been popping up. This is definitely in my top ten! (I have a very very long list of favorites)
Great plot, I love Rin's character, and the fast pace is a welcome change. I loved the whole first encounter with Kag and Inu, very cute and funny. And the Sess Rin thing was classic! Though I have to say...Naked Jaken haunted my dreams...ewwww....

You incorporate the actual anime so flawlessly, and all tharaharacters seem to take on thier own personality without becoming OOC. This is just a great story altogether. I also loved that you posted so much at once. You did that on purpose didn't you?....You knew I had to work today...so you made me stay up reading and reading...how dare you...

Okay I'm over it!

Thanks for writing! The sooner ya post the sr I r I can write another long ass review!
Ja ne!
~Sabichan~