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for The Centre

by Kyattochan

person Lady Kagome
schedule April 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aww, ts! s! I was having such a crappy morning, and then I saw you posted and just had to come look, and you gave me a shout out! Much thanks to you! But as much as I like that... wheres the story!? hehe. Oh, and about the scrolling thing, it has absolutely nothing to do with how you post it, it's AFF gone wonky. Sometimes the sites settings will change and screw with story settings. Nothing to worry about! :)

I hope to see an update for one of my favorite stories soon... ::hint hint!:: :) Thanks again for making my morning that much brighter!
person drake220
schedule April 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey. souta carries a laptop in his coat? like michael from witch hunter robin? that boy has got the freakin coolest computer on the face of the earth. nothing beats it. the chapter was cute. the blowjob thing was funny. sago's dad is plain freaky. i don;t know what train he jumped off but dear god....talking about her sex life....god, my parents do that and its not funny. she has my extreme sympathies
person emily
schedule April 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i love this fanfic!!! i read a lot of them and this one is the only one worth reviewing in a long time...and you update!!!! i love you!!! but...and i dont want to bother you...now i dont what format you write it in or what but you used to write it and it fit on my screen...but the last 2 chapters have been larger than the screen so you have to scroll right to left to read every line...i dont know if you could even fix that but it would be cool...thanks! if you dont i guess it doesnt really matter...i wouldnt stop reading it or anything! its so good
person Veil of Illusions
schedule April 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey! I love your story. I will rarely if ever start a story with more than 6 chapters posted but even though yours had 23 when I started I wanted to check it out. After I read the first chapter I just had to read all o. G. Great writing. I hope you update soon!
person snowfall
schedule April 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Totally awesome. Wish you could post faster, but alas, I know you can't spend all day writing. Can't wait for the next chapter. Love Souta's character. I just can't believe how you mix humor, sex, and seriousness. Keep up the good work!
person Nina
schedule April 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What a creative and imaginative story. So well written. I usually never read AU fics, but this one was highly recommended. The story sucked me in right away. I stayed up until 2am reading all 23 chapters. Hurry with the next installment.
schedule April 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I find it ironic that as I am in the middle of reading your story, I go to check my reviews and you have commented! Coincidence? I think not. I have actually been reading your story selfishly, after being dragged into the wonderful plot, it again made me crave to write my own story! I really enjoy how you have taken events that have really occured in the Inuyasha story plot and incorporated them into your own tale. Very impressive! I sincerely hope that you will post again soon, although, I have no right to demand that request as I am being evil myself and have not updated in over a week. whoops! The next item on my agenda though is to do some serious writing! Hopefully you will post more of this awesome and captivating tale so that my own creativity will remaine piqued!
person animegirl 007
schedule April 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It's really interesting .....but, if Kagra( forgive the spelling) doesn't die soon, I've have problem.....Update soon please....
person maria
schedule April 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a really good story, I can't wait to see what happens next. I hope Sess finally wakes up & realizes the truth & takes Rin as a mate. He deserves to be happy & she is relly perfect for him. She just has to work on his damned prejudices. And I hope Inu & Kagome end up together. They make an awesome couple!
person drake220
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i have this huge evil smile on my face right now.....sango's revenge is going to be reeaalllyyyy sweet.....hehehehe.....! update soon!