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for The Centre

by Kyattochan

person Xenia
schedule May 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You're very welcome! :D All of the praise was truly deserved, because your story has given me more enjoyment than any other I've read (and I've read some very good stories! :)). I can't believe this is your first story! Now I'm even more impressed! *L* :)

And the previews for the next chapter look great! I can't wait to read it :D
person Fate
schedule May 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
LOL! I've only read up to chapter eight so far, and I'm crying laughing. Great story! I'm eagerly reading the rest!
person AngelHeart2122
schedule May 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. I can't wait to see what happens next. You are a great writer. I am glad you wrote this chapter instead of doing your work but make sure and get it done now so you can write more soon. Good luck. ^_^
person snowfall
schedule May 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thank you. Appreciate your efforts. If I could only get my next chapter finished. Good luck with the exams. And, who says you can't post in Japan?
person Lady Kagome
schedule May 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ah hah! Another chapter!

Would you like to hear something interesting? The other day I came across a live journal community dedicated to promoting fan fiction. When I looked at the first entry someone was promoting a story that sound just like yours, only they had forgotten to put the title. When I clicked on the link, low and behold "The Centre" popped up!

So, not only do you now have people on AFF supporting you, you have people on livejournal.com supporting you! (By the way, the person promoting your story goes by xenia, on aff.net as well. I believe she has reviewed before!) Here is a link if you would like to go bask in your glory! http://www.livejournal.com/community/inuyasha_fanfic/104905.html

On to this chapter! I like all the different view points switching around. And throwing Miroku and Sango in with Yura of the Hair was quite interesting! But, poor Sesshoumaru! Though I know you won't kill him off. ;) Right... right!!!!

I look forward to reading your next chapter, I get so excited when I see that you have updated this story. But, don't let your other work fall behind just to appease us readers. Some of us do have small amounts of patience. We just enjoy the adrenaline rush when we see that you have added on!

Good job!

Lady Kagome
person Hanyou Slave
schedule May 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sess/Rin so heart wrenching. I hope you don't plan to leave us there for long. My poor Sessy. The picture you paint is sooo vivid. Tears :( Please do not make us wait for too long. I don't care if it must be a short chapter. Oh Sessy.............
person Fate
schedule May 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I've set my own science project aside to finish ready this awesome fic. Please, please, please, update soon! I love it! And please let the girls get some happy-contented pleasures in there!
person jazzyca
schedule May 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
lol, he ran into a wall. GO SENIOR WEEK! i got 16 days left of school! yay!!! great chapter. sess better not die for good!!!! lol, i can't get over the fact that inu ran into a wall. lol. ok, great chapter. update soon. GO PROCRASTINATION!!!! one time i procrastinated so much i started a report the day after it was due.
person Chloe
schedule May 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am absolutely captivated by your storyline! I can't wait for the next chapter to come out. Keep up the excellent writing (I can't wait to see what happens next!)
person laura
schedule May 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i love love love this story! the depth in which the characters have been developed is spectacular, also you've laid the world in which they reside out with great care and detail that allows for a almost film like quaility. the fact that everyone isn't after Kagome to posess the shikon no tama is a refreshing first. each character was given plausable personal conflicts and their own bit of sexual kink, all in all, i am in awe of your writing. please continue this story.