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May 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter! Please continue!
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May 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay! you updated. So happy now.
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May 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sorry I missed reviewing your last chapter! I have been so busy lately, and I must have missed the posting of it :( But, I got to read to chapters consecutively, so that was a bit of a bonus!
I really like where this story is going... I like how you integrate things from the manga into the story to work with your own imagination. The sign of a talented author! :)
I am glad you did so well on your thesis! Congratulations (though that is a double sided pleasure, because now I get to read your story faster as you update! ;) )
I'm looking forward to your next update!
~*~Lady Kagome~*~
I really like where this story is going... I like how you integrate things from the manga into the story to work with your own imagination. The sign of a talented author! :)
I am glad you did so well on your thesis! Congratulations (though that is a double sided pleasure, because now I get to read your story faster as you update! ;) )
I'm looking forward to your next update!
~*~Lady Kagome~*~
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May 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oooh... Plot twist! *does the plot twist dance* Something tells me Kohaku's information will prove VERY useful! :D And Miroku... *sigh* He's so charming... So profound... So perverted. He just HAS to be adored. I love the way you're writing him, too. You do such a great job of capturing his adorable-ness, his sexiness, his power and his pure devious-ness all in that one lovely package we all like to call Miroku! Tee hee! :D (I'm a rabid Miroku fan... Can ya tell? ;))
As always... A wonderful, wonderful chapter! Thank you! :D
As always... A wonderful, wonderful chapter! Thank you! :D
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May 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So good, so good, so good! First off, I'm a die hard Inu-Kag fan and usually skip over sections that dwell on the other couples...but I love the way you've brought Rin & Sessh as well as Sango & Miroku together. I especiallye Rie Rin's character....she's a ballsy female...so different from the usual shy, sweet, quiet persona that most fanfics give her.
Ah...and now that Kikyo has entered the story I'm all ears...I just hope Inuyasha won't be too much of a vascillating dodo....pretty please?
And while I'm begging, I'll ask mor more Inu-Kag playtime...I have a feeling a lemon between them will be integral to the plot and won't be around for a while...but a little "fruit juice" along the way shouldn't be too much to ask for, right? r alr all, the other two couples have certainly had some quality time...
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But in all things, I bow to the might of the author...you've done a great job with creating an interesting and entertaining story... so I know you won't disappoint!
Ah...and now that Kikyo has entered the story I'm all ears...I just hope Inuyasha won't be too much of a vascillating dodo....pretty please?
And while I'm begging, I'll ask mor more Inu-Kag playtime...I have a feeling a lemon between them will be integral to the plot and won't be around for a while...but a little "fruit juice" along the way shouldn't be too much to ask for, right? r alr all, the other two couples have certainly had some quality time...
:)
But in all things, I bow to the might of the author...you've done a great job with creating an interesting and entertaining story... so I know you won't disappoint!
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May 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love the new chapter! I read your author's note a few minutes ago and all the teasers where cruel. Very well written but evil. Please update soon. I'm so pleased to hear the story is past the half way point. Keep up the good work.
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May 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a wonderful fanfiction. It's a shock to read that this is your first work, because it's simply amazing. The entire time i was reading this I had a goofy smile on my face. I'm not a particularly large fan of lemons, but I just love this one! I love that you write sex scenes as animalistic; something you'd see on the Discovery channel. Referring to the females as bitches during sex is a nice touch. Keep up the good !
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-Sashi
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-Sashi
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May 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ohh, that is such a teaser. Now I can't wait for the next chapter. And Poor Kagome. Whats going to Happen between Inuyasha & Kagome?
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May 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Just a glimpse! ARGH! Please hurry, please hurry, please hurry! Exams can be made up, classes can be taken again, but the agonies I suffer waiting for the next chapter may be my undoing! (Just kidding.) Good luck on your exam and I will wait patiently. (Sigh)
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May 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am glad that you enjoyed the link I gave you :) I knew that you would appreciate it!
Then again, I'm not surprised that I haven't come across more sites promoting your story, it is truly fantastic! And to hear that you have not written before this is astounding. Your story holds things that some of mine could never, and I am a blasted English major!
I look forward to the next chapter, you have my intrest piqued with the little teasers. Especially the Kikyou one... wow, that could get really interesting!
Alrighty, got to go, but don't worry, I will be back to read more as always!
Then again, I'm not surprised that I haven't come across more sites promoting your story, it is truly fantastic! And to hear that you have not written before this is astounding. Your story holds things that some of mine could never, and I am a blasted English major!
I look forward to the next chapter, you have my intrest piqued with the little teasers. Especially the Kikyou one... wow, that could get really interesting!
Alrighty, got to go, but don't worry, I will be back to read more as always!