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for Things Never Meant to Be

by theMaven

person stella
schedule April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i love this story. please continue and i cannot wait for the next chapters to come. its nice to see the natural progressiowaroward rin and not the usual sesshy notices rin and then mates w/her. at least this relationship is building. cant wait for the next chap, keep up the good work
person shaid
schedule April 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ooooh!! you stop just when it's getting good!!! More more More!!!!!!!
person Sessysama
schedule April 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I read this one on FF.net and I absolutly loved it. Bitter Blood too! I am currently awaiting the next part of In A Different Light. I do love good Rin/Sessy fics where Sessy's character is maintained. This one is just too great, you shouldn't keep such great stories away from the ignorant masses! ^_^ Your writing style is absolutly beautiful, but perhaps what is best is it is consistant. I have read too many where they start with one speech pattern or feeling in the story but as they progress it suddenly does a 180 and you feel so lost. You maintain a rather, aristocratic, feeling to your language, which is needed for a Sessy fic considering he is the Lord of the Western Lands, and it is strong and proper without feeling archaic (gomen on the spelling there). Love your stuff.....need more In A different Light....Ja!
person SesshoumarusMistress
schedule April 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
REALLY REALLY REALLY good chapters!!! I love this story... PLEASE write more and update ASAP!!!!!!! I wanna know what happens!!!!! gives puppy eyes puhhhhlease
person me
schedule April 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow keep going
person ApriL
schedule April 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Red flashes? Maybe Inu-Yasha? Hm...I don't know. Update soon please
person Fantasycat
schedule April 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WHO WAS IT?! Write more!
person Pallas
schedule April 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was great! Good quality! Please update soon, please??
person Sesshoumarus_slave
schedule April 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic..PLEASE MORE!!!!!!!!! *cries*....I love Rin/Sess pairings.
person shaid
schedule April 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh plese tell me there's more!!! This is really good! I want more!